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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
heaven-wide heart giving me worship all the devotion I require altar-like body allowing me ritual all the love I can display soul-deep eyes showing me eternity all the religion I need hell-broad chasm separating me from you all the time I can be lonely |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This seemed like it was a happy poem, till the end..sigh..everything always has an unhappy ending... Beautiful poem as always Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is fantastic, Portia! Surely one of your best (the creme de la creme, so to speak)! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
wow, hot, superb, fantastic, need I say more?  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Portia, I liked the poem even though I'm not sure I understood. Are you separated by distance or species? lol Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I felt like Cat did too...This was an a wonderful poem Portia, really like it!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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