Dark Poetry #2 |
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Lurkers |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I have been many places And seen all the worst The Lurkers Are The beast's That strike you when your alone Or hurt They live in the darkness Of night and day And Follow behind stocking you Like prey. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Or they read your poetry and don't reply! ![]() |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I think all of us in DP have been beset by the lurkers at one time or another. Interesting view, JJ. Hardrock |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Oh yes! The lurkers are everywhere and come in many guises! Good one, Havoc. ('scusing the name, it's shorter than Jeremiah and I love it) Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Nikolette Sadness![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
as we are prey also be we lurkers? in a sense bes it true. Nikolette Sadness (cindy says i try to be poetic but it just comes out) i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You are the master of the short poetry. From you I have learned what I could understand of your magical ablilty to write. I bow a thousand bows my friend. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
thank you all for your replies and i will be reading your work on my lab top when i get up there and right before i move from here. thanks again all of you I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay, ya made me lurk--I mean "look"! I liked the creepy, "somebody's-watchin'-me" feel to this...intriguing. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great piece JJ. (should "stocking" be "stalking"?? Enjoyed... jwesley |
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