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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
The roses are dead now All thanks to me it Wasen't you. Once bright red roses Now their black as all The depths of hell I tried to give you a Better life but, i triped And and all the roses fell They never made it to your Home, to the water they needed So their surviving strength depleeded And now your red Roses turn black As i die these are just a few new one's from me. to keep your mines busy well i'm moving from Fl to SC starting tomorrow so i'll see you all soon once i get set up there. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written poem... and lovely signature... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful Jeremiah. Good luck with your move. Sandra |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Nicely written!! and I wish you best luck on your move too!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
i agree...well written...hope the move goes easily, its something i hate to do myself.  EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is a long one for you, Jeremiah! Very sad, but good as always. Have fun moving! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You fill my mind with the food that you give. This was awesome man. You have to show me your tricks. LOL Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i would only like to know the age of this amazing writer so someday i can marry his talent and be his penmen... Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
thank you all for your replies and saddness please check your email. i enjoy all of your works very much and will be reading as much as i can. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I liked this. Very nicely written and expressed. |
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