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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Blue sky eyes Filled with sighs Look at me Look above They seem to breathe So full of love Blue sky eyes Flick like Flies Focus on grey Focus on red It's all the same Can't kill the dread Blue sky eyes Follow flies Focus on wings Focus on green But all these things Remain unseen Blue sky eyes Tell no lies Stare at the floor Stare at the cell But what they saw They will not tell Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Now this, I really enjoyed. Very well done. jwesley |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta..Absolutley remarkable poem. There were so many images flying through my head as I read it. I'll have to send you an e-mail to tell you...I don't want to influence what other might see in this brilliant piece of writing. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Uta, this poem is perfect. And I agree with Hardrock, so many images in such a short time, and they are all very vivid. Thanks, loved it. Cat... |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Let me add my name to those above. A really hypnotic quality to this one Uta. Well done!  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
really enjoyed the poem, some nice images. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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