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Dark Poetry #2

My Soul

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-07-29 05:18 AM

A presentation
A sensation
runnig deep
within my soul
No concealing
any feelings
I'm not climbing
in my hole
My spirit has been awakened
There's new romance
in my soul
Our love is out of control
I look into your eyes
and can see deep within my soul.

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2000-07-29 06:52 AM

Hey Blue..another nice one. Some really good lines here. Thanks...Hardrock

Portia
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 157

2 posted 2000-07-29 07:07 AM

Ah, to look into someone's eyes and see your own soul... "My spirit has been awakened..." wonderful. There is a sigh there... I love it.

"And one day...the whole stinking world would be theirs..."
-- Velvet Goldmine (Todd Haynes, Oscar Wilde and, unofficially, David Bowie)

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2000-07-29 08:06 AM

Oh great poem!

Enjoyed it very much!

Lynne Dale
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria

4 posted 2000-07-29 08:26 AM

I really liked it. But the only time I've been Runnig is when "I hab a code in the head."
Cheers
Kethry

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.

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