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I'm Over You
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I'm Over You |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
I used to think I loved you, I convinced myself it was real, I used to think you cared for me, and felt the same as I used to feel. I know now I was mistaken, and that I never really mattered to you, At first my world was crushed, and I just didn't know what to do. But now I understand my problem, that it was never really me, It turns out your just an idiot, the biggest there could ever be. Now my life is going good, and I hope your is, too, you taught me a wonderful lesson, but now, I'm so over you. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
ooooo....i really liked this...i've just got over feeling the same way...so ive been there...i think you portrayed it perfectly...good work! |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Excellent!  Portrayed very well indeed! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Sometimes the loss of love is a blessing in disguise as they say. Glad your feeling happy, this was really good!1 The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Li..It does my heart good to know that you finally found yourself and the words to tell him to kiss off. Nicely put. Hardrock |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Agree with all the comments...nicely written..."your" in next to last stanza, should be "you're"... jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I know that feeling. Stated well, glad you are over him. It's a good feeling when you can really say "I'm DONE". Nicely written, too. Catalinamoon |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Alrighty then !!!!!!! GREAT poem here. You did an excellent job! I really loved it. And I am also glad you turned life around and made a BETTER one for yourself. Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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