Dark Poetry #2 |
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Story of mine |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA ![]() |
Liquefied limbs, Boiling brims, Luscious love, Devilish dove, Serenity seeks, Plundering leaks, Closing gates Endless bates, Story of mine, Hanging loosely in time. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Wow! loved this one. So few words, but telling quite a story indeed! More!More! ~Sash~ |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
"Story of mine, hanging loosely in time.." Awesome! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
This was good, thanks for sharing..I liked serenity seeks...Makes me think of that peacefulness we all need. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
whhoooo whheee i can't get enough of the nox!! loved this one!! excellent, just simply divine. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
I enjoyed sharing this one. John D |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I can so relate to this one, this story of yours, not so loosely hung in time after all!! Great stuff ![]() I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~*BAM*,...whoa. This story of yours is so well told. Brief and strong. Awesome writing. Take care you. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Xeo...the great thing about a poem like this is getting beyond the words and into the meaning. Nice job. Thanks for sharing. Hardrock |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Whoa! Breif but definitly got a point across,love your word choices. Keep it coming Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Indeed, ride on! -Jerm "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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