Dark Poetry #2 |
The Drive By...a little humor |
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
The Drive By It gets too busy each passing day as we just seem to miss all the time we've wanted for, just a tiny kiss. What has this world been coming to a society too fast, when all I ever wanted was a kiss to linger, last. The sharing of affection is hard to capture when, we keep on passing by, in time to reach each other's end. I've an idea that may linger on yours and also mine. Let's meet, in passing, our lips to kiss when traveling each to find. M 7*2k *note..since I was writing about kisses this morning I ran across this picture and couldn't resist just a touch of humor...even if in the darkness of passion [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Awesome poem. Gets one to think and hey once in a while we need humor in dark passions, know what I mean? LOL Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Sweet Poem - I liked it! Deepak |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Cute poem. Makes Me wanna just reach 'n' kiss someone!!LOL |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I loved it too, Maureen. Nice idea, we shold all stop and kiss more often. Catalinamoon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Xeonox thank you yes kissing and humor...could do with plenty more of each... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Maureen..that was such a sweet poem. And you are so sweet for sharing it with us. Hardrock |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Deepak, sash and catalinamoon thank you ..I had fun once I caught site of that picture... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Hardrock thank you..don't know about sweet..but it was a cute idea.... ~~softsmiles Maureen |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
A good reminder to stop and "smell the flowers", thanks for sharing!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Deborah1...yes I try to do that all the time... ~~softly Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Maureen it was gentle and whimsical. We should take time each day and your poem helped me remember why. Kethry Kethry. as soon as you feel too old to do a thing. Do it! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Lynne Dale I am so glad you enjoyed this little laugh..I was trying to bring a smile to my own face when I wrote it.. ~~softly Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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