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Emptiness |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
Emptiness I feel desolated Abandoned and free Yet it seems that Emptiness is consuming me A void within That hungers for love Yet it feels free Free as a dove... My freedom is fleeting False hopes it gives As it feeds upon me As if it truly lives Emptiness fills me With loneliness tonight No more I will take No more I will fight... My soul still aches For love it must Yet it kills me slowly And turns life to dust Life is so fleeting Death is wherever I see Only love is eternal Yet it means nothing Nothing to me... [This message has been edited by Broken_Heart (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is really good! Dark and sad, but good!  |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
My soul still aches, for love it must...don't give up on love!! Very well expressed!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh man how can i pick a fave line in this....but the one that hit me the most were the last 2... only love is eternal, well you know the rest!!!!!!! way to go!!!!!!! this is exceptional. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful work here hon. Describing how we all have felt at times, wanting love, needing love, yet sort of scared to love again... Brilliant  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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