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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I drove you hard and cold Until the final days were Sold Stole from this special place Remembered by some but, Never replaced I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
an interesting poem, I loved the first line "I drove you hard and cold". really enjoyed your poem. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Small in size, but makes an impact. Wonderfull ending. I like the rhythm. "Suicides have already betrayed the body. Still born, they don't always die, bu dazzled, they can't forget a drug so sweet that even children would |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
the first line drew me in., I really liked this Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
great work here. i like the never replaced. no they never are. kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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