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misscris Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 27Leawood, KS, USA |
It's devastating to find out you're only valued for your looks, when you know that you are so much more. All comments welcome. Boy... Enamored you gaze...lustful And hungry--devouring my body With one glance; That's all it takes, You're hooked; Insatiable. Addicted, Obsessing Junkie. Desires overwhelming, Uncontrollable urge; Your own personal fantasy Made flesh; Worshipped and adored, Perverse and divine. Fiend. But you can't have me. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I think to value someone on their looks is just superficial and I never could deal well with that..You expressed this well in your poem. Beauty comes in so many forms...I look inside...Nice work!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
misscris..nice interpretation of the "meat market syndrome". Hardrock |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is a very good take on the way we are perceived. Please check your email for a special message.  |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Oh yeah! Loved the last line!!  Expressed very well. |
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misscris Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 27Leawood, KS, USA |
thanks all for your support, this one will be printed in a book put out by the national library of poetry, so look for me. misscris 'somethings arrive on their own mysterious hour, on their own terms and not yours, to be seized or relinquished forever. |
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