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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
The Silence (for Hardrock) Will you still Love me When you know The blinding Darkness Of my soul? Will you still Wipe away My tears When you realise The reason why? Or will Your warm heart petrify When I confide The crime I can no longer hide? Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woah!  Is this written from the heart or what! Tremendous poem Uta... my fav to date! Hmm... don't know what else to say! Stumped me! Hey, don't we all have a darkness in our soul?! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Uta,...this is a very moving piece. Hauntingly real. Affecting. Mmmhm. Take care U. *Peace. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is great! ive often asked these same questions (but maybe not as eloquently as you)....liked this alot. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh the honesty here, well spoken!! And such real questions that we can be afraid to ask. Love it, thanks for sharing!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta...when I wasn't watching, you peeked inside my soul, didn't you? This is so beautiful. Thank you....Hardrock |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
lotharingia, wonderfully expressed. really enjoyed this poem. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Forrest Cain Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 306Chas.,W.V. USA |
What crime? I hope it didn't involve blood and fellow poets. Only kidding. Nice write and universal to us all. Liked the first verse a lot,especially Blinding darkness of my soul. forrest |
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