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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Life's Songs ~*Marge Tindal*~ Life sings of us the songs of mirth The sweetest song, life - giving birth Aria of our youth sung in sweet surprise Within our hearts soon harmonized Sings of us through all our days Joyous melodies sung with praise Melody of hearts so tender Pitch us now in sweet surrender Song of another pierces our soul Singing love until we're old Life sings of us sweet lullabies Kisses us softly then says goodbye Within a heart our song returning Hummed now in a heart of mourning It matters much the song life sings Caught in the joy of remembering Life sings of us sweet lullabies Kisses us softly then says goodbye |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a wonderful choice Marge! So tender and melodic, such a beautiful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful Marge!! I think it is really brilliant! Love and hugs, Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Ahh m'dear, full circle... as ever life must be. You've done it again Marge, made me smile that soft smile and whisper that gentle sigh. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Life sings of us sweet lullabies Kisses us softly then says goodbye Yes! Indeed it does marge, lovely work....as always. < !signature-->God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Marge what lovely words here!! Life sings many different songs!! Nice!!  Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I like! Great job as always Marge ~Heather |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lovely and wisdom filled... the poetic circle of life perfect choice to reflect your wonderful talent... jm |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I haven't read a poem of yours that hasn't touched my heart!!! You need to get more in here to be voted on! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Marge, This is so beautiful...tears are flowing now. A dear friend of mine passed away just yesterday, and this was such a perfect piece to see today. Would you mind if I shared it with the others who need to see this?? Bonnie |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is a keeper and I vote yes! Cor |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Thank you for your many kind comments. Lil' Lizzie~ Hugs and big thanks to you, my friend. Christopher~ Just knowing you smile and sigh is more than enough for this lady. Thank you. EagleOne~ Thank you so much for your thoughtfulness. JustBleu~ So pleased you enjoyed. XAngel~ I'm glad you like this one. JanetMarie~ Thank you, hon. SEA~ Give me time, gal. I'm searching ! There are so many good poets here who need to also get in on this. BSC~ Hon, please share. Also please accept my sincerest condolences in the loss of your friend. *HUGS* Corinne~ Thank you, my dear little friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Marge, this is a beautiful work! We couldn't go without it being in our book! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Indeed--mind if I sing a little harmony here? Or at least do a little back-up singing? Love ya, mom... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely, lilting.....I like this a lot, Marge!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Marge! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sisboomba i love this ya! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
:  !signature-->All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
As a rule, squirrels love the songs of deer. Especially deer who write so eloquently about both sadness and happiness, and life. Thanks for the gift. Mike |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Marge, I love your wonderful style and perspective of things--I don't think the book would be complete without one of your poems in it--This one is a good choice, David |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lilting, lovely, beautiful and many more adjectives are hereby reserved for your poem, Marge...and its a treat and a visual delight to read each one of them... regards, sudhir. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I'd probably vote on anything of your Marge, and this is a wonderful choice. Very Nice. Parker |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ Your work always shines with such beauty and this my friend truly shines Lovely Marge Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, There are so many of your poems that could go in this book, but this is a wonderful choice Liz |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Awesome Marge |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, dear, this is amazing, of course this one has my vote! Almost every poem that you have written should be in the book, you are so talented!Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, I don't know. Its an ok poem but, hmm, for the book, gosh, let me think a bit.....ok I thought. YES! YES! YES!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoveBug~ Thank you, sweetie. Karilea~ U2 Serenity~ I think our hearts harmonize in friendship. Thank you. PoetdeVine~ Thanks so much my friend. Denise~ My 'right-from-the-get-go' friend ! Walt~ You are wonderful ! Jeffrey~ I hope that means you like. (looks like that little face should be on Seymour's ship in his 'Angry Sea' poem. )LOL !Mike~ You are more than welcome, my friend. I thank you. David~ Thank you, friend. Sudhir~ What nice things to say. I thank you. Parker~ BIG *HUGS*, babe ! Tracie~ You are such a sweetie. Thank you more than I can say. Lizzie~ And yours also, my friend. Thank you sincerely. Munda~ So pleased that you liked it. Melissa~ You are such a great reader and replier. I appreciate you. Balladeer~ And, gosh ... you didn't even know the questions yet ! *wink* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
*contented sigh* Eric "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ *Contented smile* Thank you ! ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-23-2000).] |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Marge, What a wonderful addition this poem would be to the Passion's book. It is, as always, very lovely rhyme. Kris the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
A lovely poem about life's truths! Print it! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Just beautiful, Marge! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely gorgeous Marge!! My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautifully sung Marge. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Great piece Marge...perfectly beautiful.. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WarmHeart~ Thank you for your kind thoughts. Doreen~ I thank you and take a moment here to say how much this poet enjoys what you write also. Martie~ You are just too sweet, my friend. Nah ... just sweet enough ! DarkAngel~ Thank you for your thoughtful reply. BrianM~ Sing along with me ? Thanks, my friend. ChrisG~ You give my face a smile. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Wouldn't appear this even needs my vote but I couldn't resist. Beautiful Marge... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sea_Of_OKC~ Forget the vote ... I just like knowing that you enjoyed what I wrote. Thank you for taking the time to let me know. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, This is so beautiful, you amaze me with your poetry much, thanks for sharing it and I do belive it is at the wrong end of the line don't you!!!! Love ya, Cerenity |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Simply beautiful!!!! ~Kelly Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
This reminds me of my Grandmother. Thank you for that. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ This poet thanks you, my friend. KellSue~ Thank you, hon. I love the songs life sings. Enigma~ Thank you ... to know it struck a cord of remembrance is the wish of this poet's heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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dad-o-8 New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 8 |
Bless you for this one........Marge my soul is in flight...... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Here's another beautiful work that I missed somehow...voting...for sure. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My Warrior~ Your soul has seen many flights. You come to me on the rising of the sun ... hover with me through the day ... catch me in the evening ... and rock my night away. You are the rock of my foundation. The beating of my heart. The very soul of you lies resting in a very special part ... of me ... loving you. Love ... and more~ ~*Maiden ... yours*~ ETHome~ I thank you so very much for taking the time to enjoy what I do. You are a special friend to do that. I appreciate it so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sometimes the melancholy of the day, brings me back to archived pieces to play searching for some friends who I dearly miss ... and I find them here~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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sasanka7 Junior Member
since 2010-11-17
Posts 30 |
Very nice. |
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