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since 1999-12-15Posts 2184
I know some people said they really liked this so I thought I would post it here.
Without eyes to see
The color of your skin
Or knowledge of your nationality
Nor eyes to see the shape of your being
Or eyes to view your youthfulness or age
Or knowledge of your degrees or lack thereof
Or the knowledge of your religion
Or any other difference that creates prejudice
Here at Passionate Forums
We look within each other's soul
As we bare our inner being
In poetry and verse
Our hearts commune
Without the boundaries,
The fences eyes create
On which prejudice thrives
We communicate as God intended
Heart to heart
Spirit to spirit
One with God
I view each poet here
A star in the galaxy of love.
© Copyright 2000 Septsong - All Rights Reserved
[This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 06-19-2000).]
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since 2000-01-22Posts 18554
SS this is PERFECT!!!
a beautiful poem of acceptance and
also lovely tribute to the friendships
and acceptance we all share here..
how could this NOT be in the book!!!
since 1999-11-07Posts 1521
Wunnerful...we need a 1000 page book! I love this poem, it is so very true!
since 1999-06-18Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN
Ahhh... wonderful! If only the world managed to keep as orderly and kind as Passions!
"Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon
since 2000-03-28Posts 1369
SeptSong - this is so touching and I agree.
Net friends are amazing - well written
since 2000-04-30Posts 14774
Very beautifully written SeptSong ... I echo all the above ... well done!
since 1999-07-02Posts 551
This was so pretty. It has to be in the book !
"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
since 2000-01-18Posts 22676
Septsong~ this is perfect for the book...I agree the friends here are the best! -SEA< !signature-->
[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 06-20-2000).]
since 1999-06-20Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
This is fabulous.
since 2000-01-10Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
This is one of my all time favorites of yours and gets my vote, sweet friend. love, Ellie
since 2000-02-04Posts 2919
New York, USA
Septsong - Loved this the first time -- still love it.....Bonnie
since 2000-02-28Posts 1816
One of my favorites. This could serve as life's motto in acceptance of all, regardless of age, color, creed or religion.
Very well written with a powerful message. Should be a keeper, for sure. Love, Marcy
since 1999-10-08Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
Beautiful indeed SeptSong !
since 1999-12-15Posts 2184
Thanks everybody for your comments. I am taking a break from writing poetry at the moment, but you all keep writing, I'm reading.. ;}
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