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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I know some people said they really liked this so I thought I would post it here. Without eyes to see The color of your skin Or knowledge of your nationality Nor eyes to see the shape of your being Or eyes to view your youthfulness or age Or knowledge of your degrees or lack thereof Or the knowledge of your religion Or any other difference that creates prejudice Here at Passionate Forums We look within each other's soul As we bare our inner being In poetry and verse Our hearts commune Without the boundaries, The fences eyes create On which prejudice thrives We communicate as God intended Heart to heart Spirit to spirit One with God I view each poet here A star in the galaxy of love. © Copyright 2000 Septsong - All Rights Reserved [This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow SS this is PERFECT!!! a beautiful poem of acceptance and also lovely tribute to the friendships and acceptance we all share here.. how could this NOT be in the book!!! wonderful work |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Wunnerful...we need a 1000 page book! I love this poem, it is so very true! ~Heather |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Ahhh... wonderful! If only the world managed to keep as orderly and kind as Passions! Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
SeptSong - this is so touching and I agree. Net friends are amazing - well written ~netswan |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very beautifully written SeptSong ... I echo all the above ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This was so pretty. It has to be in the book ! ~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Septsong~ this is perfect for the book...I agree the friends here are the best! -SEA< !signature--> Live,Love,Laugh ~SueB [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is fabulous. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is one of my all time favorites of yours and gets my vote, sweet friend. love, Ellie |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Septsong - Loved this the first time -- still love it.....Bonnie |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
One of my favorites. This could serve as life's motto in acceptance of all, regardless of age, color, creed or religion. Very well written with a powerful message. Should be a keeper, for sure. Love, Marcy |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful indeed SeptSong ! |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Thanks everybody for your comments. I am taking a break from writing poetry at the moment, but you all keep writing, I'm reading.. ;} |
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