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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Life, an ocean... Waves... Tossing,turning, open space, Wind... Salty is its taste, Bitter is my friend, Storms... Raging all around me, Rain is falling, Night... Darkness comes, Fear invades, There is light, Through clouds of confusion, Anchor... The master of the sea, Life... Then I breathe, Hope... New horizons, Uncharted journeys, Peace... Fear has escaped, calmness is beauty, Love... The great pearl, One of sacrifice, Life... The ocean of endless possibilities. [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Life, an ocean... Waves... Tossing,turning, open space, *************** Life... The ocean of endless possibilities. Beautiful, Poetry at it's best All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Romantic Heart! The formatting is so unique and well thought-out ... it flows beautifully with your thoughts and conclusion. Loved this! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow this is a very cool poem I really like the format and presentation and all the images of forces of nature... perfect choice jm |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Ohhh love and the sea in one poem! Yippeee!  ~Heather |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Romantic Heart, this was BRILLIANT!!! Did I say that loud enough? WOW The way the flow of the poem matches the words really brings to mind the turmoil and calm that is both love and the sea. I really really like this, but I bet you had guessed that by now  Best wishes, Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Jeff, Kit,janet,x-angel,and Eric!:0 best wishes to all of you too! |
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Rose Petal Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 52WVa. USA |
I am a enjoy your poetry? beautiful contrast between love and sea, great format! I hope you don't mind me reading all your poems, I e-mailed you with permission to copy some for my boyfriend. [This message has been edited by Rose Petal (edited 06-30-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Rose Petal, I am not a great poet, but your kind words encourage me |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~wonderful writing~ a vote cast A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Danny for your vote!!!I appreciate it!! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A wonderful poem. I love the way you layed it out. A vote well deserved. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is great!! Loved the way the lines flowed from one to another...excellent!!!  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Prometheses..and Devine! I appreciate your vote and comments! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 07-01-2000).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This one made me smile; thus, a vote. Mike |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Has to be one of my favorites of your poetry. Very nicely done. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Bsquirrel..glad you smiled, thanks for your vote! Mike..Thank you, glad it is your favorite! |
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