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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2000-06-19 07:23 PM


Up above our sun
Down below the dirt
Inside the fish's mouth
Upside down
Where is it??
I don't know
Behind the star
Under the feet of that old man
Within the heart of a television set
It is not there
I do not see it
Blustering by as it rakes past the trees
I sense something unreal to me
Through the screech of the fire engine I hear it
Deep within the flavor of the frozen cone I feel it
In the traces of our mere words I see it

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"Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown



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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
1 posted 2000-06-19 07:43 PM


I like these kind of poems!  
But I am slow on the uptake...what is it?
I thought maybe...my soul???
~Heather

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2000-06-20 01:38 PM


or Jesus maybe?? my vote anyways on tis merit wow!
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-06-20 02:05 PM


Mystery has a beauty of it's own.

Voted

Jon

Colin
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
4 posted 2000-06-20 03:09 PM


Sorry, I don't know where it is. Heck, I don't even know WHAT it is, but I like it  
Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2000-06-21 02:27 PM


What do you see, love, humanity?  In any aspect I do like this poem.  And agree with Jon.  Mystery is very intriuging and lovely to me.

Joy

JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
6 posted 2000-06-21 02:28 PM


What do you see, love, humanity?  In any aspect I do like this poem.  And agree with Jon.  Mystery is very intriuging and lovely to me.

Joy

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
7 posted 2000-06-23 12:52 PM


Everything and nothing!!!!   Thanks Guys, I'm glad you are enjoying this one!!  

Bridgette

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
8 posted 2000-06-24 09:59 PM


You guys and gals are soo much fun....what and where is it!!  I love the all soo many interpretations!!  

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

epoet
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since 2000-05-11
Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa
9 posted 2000-07-11 09:23 PM


what is it?  good question with so many different answers.  I like the mystery of this one and the idea of exactly what is it.
like this poem a lot.


P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love


BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
10 posted 2000-07-12 08:24 AM


Gotta love a poem that has this much mystery in it!!! It certainly leaves one pondering. This is great.  Bonnie
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
11 posted 2000-07-12 08:37 AM


Yeah loved the mystery, I thought maybe just plain old the air we breath  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
12 posted 2000-07-15 12:19 PM


Ohhhh I'm having sooo much fun with this and you all......Cool!!!

Thank You!!  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

13 posted 2000-07-15 08:26 AM


interesting poem... liked muchly.
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
14 posted 2000-07-21 11:57 AM


Thanks Mike!!!  
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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