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BamaPoet
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 34
Dothan, AL USA

0 posted 2000-07-30 11:43 AM


I had a dream
just the other night,
you and I were together
and you were holding me tight.

We were up in the mountains
and you were by my side,
we came up on a river
so clear and so wide.

We walked down through a field
and sat down in the grass,
what little time we had
was passing very fast.

I told you that I loved you
you said that you loved me,
wherever this may lead to
we'll have to wait and see.

The sun reflecting off your hair
was like the purest gold,
this beauty sitting before me
was a wonder to behold.

I looked deep into your eyes
that's when I lost my heart,
I knew I would always love you
right from the start.

I took you in my arms
and kissed you tenderly,
it felt so good to hold you
so very close to me.

Darkness was beginning to fall
we had to be on our way,
it's sad to have to say goodbye
to such a perfect day.

I know this was just a dream
that never will come true,
I just want you to remember
I'll always cherish you.


© Copyright 2000 Mark Childre - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-30 09:28 PM


Without our dreams where would we be?????
nicely done



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



BamaPoet
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34
Dothan, AL USA
2 posted 2000-07-30 10:00 PM


Thanks Prometheus! Yes, that's true...without our dreams, where WOULD we be?
And dreams can be so nice, but sooner or later we have to awaken, only to find our someone special isn't there.  Thanks for the comment!

Vaporous One
Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35

3 posted 2000-07-30 10:46 PM


Nice poem, one for the book.  
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