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BamaPoet
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34
Dothan, AL USA

0 posted 2000-07-30 11:31 AM


When I am with you
i am in a tropical paradise of love.
An uninhabited island
in a crystal blue ocean of passion.

I want to run barefoot across the pristine,
sun-drenched sand with you.
Together forever in our own private world.
A world like no other,
untouched and unspoiled by human hands.

When I am with you I am lost
in a sea of absolute tranquility,
oblivious to all but your touch,
your smile and your immaculate beauty.

A beauty unmatched by anything
this small piece of Heaven called Paradise
could possible offer.

Together we can make our own Paradise
where we shall run barefoot
through the sands of time forever.


© Copyright 2000 Mark Childre - All Rights Reserved
Vaporous One
Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35

1 posted 2000-07-30 11:33 AM


Very nice; I think I could hear the waves breaking in the background.  
BamaPoet
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34
Dothan, AL USA
2 posted 2000-07-30 11:36 AM


Thank you, it would be nice to be someplace like this, wouldn't it? But sometimes Paradise can be revisited.

[This message has been edited by BamaPoet (edited 07-30-2000).]

Heather Miller
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
3 posted 2000-07-30 11:40 AM


Very romanitc......
Hugs,
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be?We would have no wonderful memories to cherish.With love it brings hurt with hurt brings bittersweet

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