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Fading Kisses |
minstrel Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 21Bowling Green, KY |
~Fading Kisses~ Your soft lips caress my awaiting skin. Gently teasing with each warm touch Relaxed and at peace I am then For I know I've never been loved this much. My heart seems to freely swim In a pool of warmth and emotion. Knowing this is of no whim My ship sets sail upon your ocean. With each new caress of your care With each memory being made. I soon realize that what once was there Is now beginning to fade. Each kiss makes my skin tingle, But only shortly does it stay. For as the ringing bell does jingle The sound must always fade away. Feelings of a warm summer's day are made By what your gentle lips give to me. Even though from my skin they may fade, They will never from my memory. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Can really tell when there is a difference can't you? But you're right you always remember the real meaningful ones. This piece is very well written...thanks..I enjoyed.. |
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Flower Power Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29Ottawa, Ontario, Canada |
Very beautiful! You have my vote! "Each kiss makes my skin tingle, But only shortly does it stay. For as the ringing bell does jingle The sound must always fade away." -- that is very true, but, as you said, it stays in your memory. I loved it! Love, Stephanie Lafleur. "Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes: work never begun." ~Christina Rossetti |
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michellemckee Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49Tucson, AZ |
Ahh Minstrel, So true, only by keeping the memories we hold dear can we truly value what is yet to come. Well written, you have my vote!!! Life is not a spectator Sport! Dance like no one's watching. Love like it's never going to hurt. |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Excellent offering, minstrel. Very, very nice. This is a "Keeper". Has my vote ! Waiting for my own kisses, Geoffrey |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very Beautiful. I understand the feeling you put in this one. I sure felt it. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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minstrel Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 21Bowling Green, KY |
Heather, Geoffrey, michellemckee, Stephanie, and ethome thank you all. I'm pleased that you enjoyed this piece witch is also my first submission to Passions. I hope to exchange more works with you all. minstrel |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
well written. Fine bit of poetry. |
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