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Ghostly Romance |
juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Softly I was awakened in the stillness of the night. A mans gentle voice whispered a name, It wasn't mine. Fear gripped me. The darkness seemed to swirl. Again he spoke to her, "Elizabeth, my darling, come to me". My heart was racing now. Who was this stranger? And was the darkness masking his face? Suddenly she spoke, "Oh yes my love I am here". I felt dizzy, this must be a dream. No sooner had I thought this, When I smelled the aroma of sweet perfume. My heart began to calm. And peace then filled my room. What was happening? How could this be? I felt a soft breeze... And the dialogue began. Tender words of love exchanged. Words of longing, Pains of seperation. Joy in finding one another. Death had been defeated. These spirits were one again. I blinked as I saw their figures. And slowly they began to dance. It was a beautiful and glorious waltz. Their love had been given a second chance. And I knew that I was witnessing... A gift of ghostly romance. [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Juliet...So beautiful, got chills as I read it. Haunting......Love it. Bonnie |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A romance from the other side eh Julie...well you get top marks for tremendous imagination and excellent delivery..write on sweet girl! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Bonnie, I got chills as I wrote it...lol...thanks for the nice words. Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Ethome, wow what a compliment coming from you. Thanks so much. And I shall do just that...lol....Juls |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
VERY GOOD Juls......Loved it LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Heather thank you so much. This was different for me but it was just there. Love, Juls |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What a lovely tale...very rich. K |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well written... nice flow... beautiful... |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Severn, thank you so much. It was a pleasure to write it. Take care, Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Avanti thank so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day, Juls |
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Tiziano Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 14 |
Nice work, but maybe, and I insist on the maybe, you should work it out to be a sort story... Tiziano |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Tiziano, do ya think? Maybe I should do that. That might just be cool. Build a story around this tale, hmmmmm, me thinks me likes this idea...hehe, thanks for the suggestion. Take care, Juls |
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