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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Now that I've turned young, when will the Justason girls married time allow them to ever kiss me, never caring that the clock's ticking because love was stuck in their budding breasts and lips were locked. But I'll grow with the time gone plumb crazy and the bell of truth that rings. How can I say I am old just musing in the office with my coffee cup, steaming in hand, blue-eyed behind glasses - thinking thoughts of pretty types, dyed dark rooted hair that makes no impression upon old friends I've kept - I have turned young. [This message has been edited by ethome (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
COOL, LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
I'm gonna tell you the truth,...OK ? This is a very unique style you have here. It was interesting how it drew me in, begging me to follow and understand. I have to reiterate with my "Cooool" too ! Have to check out a couple more of yours, OK ? Peace, Geoffrey S. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Very nice and very realistic too - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
nice poem... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Echo of 'I was so much older then I'm younger than that now'...... Like It Jon |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Heather I'm glad you think it's cool.... Thank you Geoffery I was trying a little free verse here. Thank you jamesjiao I appreciate. Thanks AVANTI for dropping in to read. Thanks Jon...I guess it does have that ring to it, although that was'nt the inspiration. A friend of mine is acting a little silly right now. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
E.. how did i miss this.. i guess with all my computer probs Im slipping... this is a different style for you... love the wisdom of it... im in here searching for more missed treasure  jm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ponderous poetry ethome, count me in for this! |
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