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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
I try so hard to be brave and strong Yet whatever I do seems to be wrong The love that I need, just isn't there I've no one to cherish, no one to care I want so much to be loved, to be needed Yet warnings, so clear, I let go unheeded My future looks empty...I'm filled with fear To be all alone year after year The love that I feel just will not die So alone I will be and alone I will cry I'll keep the memories of times that we had All of the good, yes, even the bad The children are mine, at least for awhile They're good for me now sometimes I can smile Maybe with time, the pain will be less The hurt will subside, I only can guess But the sadness I feel will always be there As I go on alone with no one to share My ups and my downs, the good and the bad Never knowing the love I wished that I'd had Linda Tiuch |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Oh honey, that was so sad....... (very well put though) You touched me so much and my cheeks got damp ![]() LITL, Heather Keep your eyes fixed to heaven and the PERFECT love will come along ![]() With God all things are possible. |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Linda, this just sounds so sad, ![]() ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Loved the rhyming. you made me think of U2's 'With or without you' voted! - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written... sad but well expredssed If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
When love beckons you follow him,but as his wings may enfold you so may he crucify you. Love is hard but wonderful as well. liked your poem Jon |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Linda my heart was just aching as I read this. Again you have touched me. Take care and big hugs to ya, Juls |
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