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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Lead me away on ethereal wings dusted with darkened imagery that your brilliance brings You've been sent from above though you may be "Down Under" A touch of your glove has softened the thunder that has abated my life These ochre refrains orchestrating the fray have bled out my being Cliched Heart over-blown, over used Cacophony of strains reverberating my day have weakened this "mote" Poison Dart over-thrown...abused Suddenly... Pinspots break through the blackened cloth of sky like clouds swept through a sieve illuminating the broken pieces, left of what is left of who I am While "Belief" is ending I am wrought without the will to live imaginary "Golden Fleeces" tempt disillusion...I am damned And so while weaving my own cyber-web with hands that are forlorn and while losing my Main Passion I stumbled into "Passions" door Then Dark Angel struck her caring match to see this one who's torn an oxymoron born So... Lead me away Dark Angel if that is who you are... Dusted by you're hopeful imagery the "Dark" meets the "Dark" Our souls collide, coincide Our Darkness shared... one hopeful, one hopeless Spread your wings black as my essence to cover this Ephemeral Wraith What Holy trough do you lead me to ? How I crave a Sanctuary where my soul could bathe But no...you and I... We are just flesh and blood with different wounds and sometimes scars will last forever Some wounds can heal if they are found ...others only fester You go to Live, to Hope, to Dream I go to die...to hope to Live it seems... for I am "Down Under" even under you Dark Angel, the World Imbroglio...and I am asunder a tattered flag alone, unfurled The "Low" came to its lowest point... There're just so many lives I've died to Live to never find a home ...not even in my heart But Dark Angel watches over my night she reaches out... and hopes to have me see some light She reaches out... toward the one whose heart is dying within doubt... Dark Angel...is there a Miracle about ? (At this point I'll take a crumb of one) [This message has been edited by Geoffrey Sonnen (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Geoffrey,WOW, I don't know what to say, this is beautiful....I'm sort of lost for words  Thank you! Is there a Miracle about? you ask, Indeed there is Geoffrey. Thanks again, talk to you soon |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Miracles do happen...you just need to believe. Nicely written. Linda |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
VERY nice..... I was moved beyond compare....... LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
incredibly captivating...hooked me completely .......GMV.......ethome.. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful!!! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written poem. Enjoyed very much. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
What a gift you give her with these words! This is beautiful! Miracles happen all the time! God is with us all the time, and He understands. I really enjoyed this one! Two souls who reach out to one another in a time of need. Accidental? Some might say so. I say no way, a miracle indeed! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well written... great work.... wonderful... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This poem is driven by emotion and feeling. Very nice Jon |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Magnificent!!! Bonnie |
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Tiziano Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 14 |
The imagery is fascinating and powerful. Good work. Tiziano |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What an incredible tribute to a special friend...absolutely lovely in both its imagery and in its intentions of honoring DA ...very cool write ... such a wonderful gifting of words and inspiration. Lucky girl Maree Beautiful Geoff |
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