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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Go Deeper Barcelona was in your eyes gleaming dreaming beaming eyes shy unashamed hungering eyes that had seen so few tears eyes brown & insatiable eyes wide & questioning eyes raw & erotic eyes that promised sex without touching and conquered me gently blanketing my nakedness eyes that wrapped their light like legs around me beckoning go deeper... Barcelona beyond pupils and irises beautiful windows to one sensuous soul By Todd-Michael Phillips |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Honey you posted this poem already under a different name LOL LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I liked the line "conquered me gently" nice writing! |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Thank You Danny! |
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Flower Power Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29Ottawa, Ontario, Canada |
Very interesting. I like it very much. It's true that one can see a lot in someone's eyes. Love, Stephanie Lafleur "Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes: work never begun." ~Christina Rossetti |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Stephanie, Thank you... yes the eyes do indeed reveal much! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. enjoyed muchly. |
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N2Wishin Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 38 |
nice poem intense. |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Mike: Thanks for reading & posting!!! N2Wishin: Nice of you to say so!!! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Toddles, loved it. Gotta love those eyes. Take care, Juls |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Hi, Tod, Good description of that pair of eyes. They are always my favourite, hehe. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Juliet-2u: Thanks, yes the eyes get me everytime!!! James: Me too, I think I have an eye fetish!!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Interesting piece but very enjoyable  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Thanks again Tracie! |
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Vaporous One Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35 |
"These eyes..." This was a very nice poem. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Wow! I can't believe it! A man who isn't obsessed with only blue or green eyes. I'd like to see more men write about brown eyes. This was wonderful! Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Vaporous: Thanks for saying so!!! Temptress: My Brown Eyed Girl! The most beautiful people have brown eyes!!! |
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N2Wishin Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 38 |
"sex without touching and conquered me gently blanketing my nakedness" Nice! |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Thanks again! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"eyes that promised sex without touching and conquered me gently blanketing my nakedness ... beautiful windows to one sensuous soul" beautiful todd! the eyes are indeed the window to the soul! i love it dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Dg: Thanks-a-Bunch!!! |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Toddles, Oh how well you have written of those eyes!!!! This is great. Bonnie |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
thank you BSC! |
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