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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Blind for life I freely accept, If I can see you yet again, My hearing I gladly give up, To listen to the beating of your heart, Losing the gift of smell I don’t dread, If only I could bathe in your scent, Losing my taste in things I eat, If only once I could sample your treats, Loss of sensation I will learn to adapt, To cuddle with you one final time, I will readily give up my last breath, To see you alive gulping your last breath. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
hhhmmmmmmmm, very good!! LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well written... touched me...that kind of sacrifices you are ready to make... well done ...work...and you have a very giving heart if that is not ficticious If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thank your the lovely comments and I do not have a ficticious heart, thank god. Ronil Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
look who you find when on other branches you climb!!! this poem here, my friend nox, is one of your best by far!! way to go!!  kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Interesting little piece Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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