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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-07-21 08:48 PM


My heart hears
the echo of past dreams
resounding through the canyon

My heart hears
his whispering voice
guiding me through the valley

My heart hears
the words he speaks
reverberating through my soul

My heart hears
the sound of his footsteps
walking through the scenes of life

My heart hears
his unwavering support
coming through loud and clear

My heart hears
the wisdom of his words
soothing all of my fears

My heart hears
the sound of his love
whispering softly on the wind




Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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1 posted 2000-07-21 09:04 PM


This is so gentle and beautiful.  Bonnie
SEA
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2 posted 2000-07-21 09:38 PM


LW~ this is so touching and gentle.....I really like this one.   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



epoet
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3 posted 2000-07-21 11:05 PM


good poem jennifer.  can feel the sentiment in this one. very well written.

P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love


Heather Miller
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4 posted 2000-07-22 01:06 PM


Very beautifully written  
LITL,
Heather


With God all things are possible.

L Tiuch
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5 posted 2000-07-22 01:59 PM


Beautifully said.  He is with us all the time and this says it so gently.
Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2000-07-22 02:49 PM


Just wanted to say thank you to all who read this and took the time to reply.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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7 posted 2000-07-22 04:31 PM


Like the others, I love the gentle beauty I find in this one. I hope today finds you well and healing my friend. Miss you
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-07-22 05:29 PM


LoneWolf~
Oh, so pretty and peaceful ...

'My heart hears
the sound of his footsteps
walking through the scenes of life'

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Fred Hobbs
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9 posted 2000-07-22 10:23 PM


Lone Wolf,  

I love this poem.  It's beauty and simplicity are very compelling.  You have my vote.

fh

AVANTI
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10 posted 2000-07-23 01:01 AM


simple and well done...
liked it...lovely

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
11 posted 2000-07-23 05:09 AM


Lovely poem Lone Wolf!
I love how you tie in "My heart hears," with such beautiful emotional expressions. In fact I love that line, "my heart hears."

My vote's in!

Sven
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12 posted 2000-07-23 11:59 PM


Excellent LW, you've done well with this one. . .

Superb. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
13 posted 2000-07-24 12:05 PM


very nice lone wolf     how nice it is to know that HE's with us always...  

wonderful love poem to the big man!  

dg

"i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner

Jeffrey Carter
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14 posted 2000-07-24 01:36 AM


Badaboom!!!
Sudhir Iyer
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15 posted 2000-07-24 07:43 AM


very beautiful sentiments, Lone Wolf... lovely!

regards,
sudhir

Lone Wolf
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16 posted 2000-07-25 10:51 PM


Just wanted to say thank you to all who took the time to red and reply.  Your words are deeply appreciated.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

jamesjiao
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17 posted 2000-07-25 11:45 PM


This is very good, Lone Wolf. I like it when I use both my mind and heart to hear things that cannot be heard otherwise. voted

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



Janet Marie
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18 posted 2000-08-06 12:59 PM


beautiful and gracful LW...
wonderful work... words of wisdom

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
19 posted 2000-08-06 01:48 PM


This is beautiful Lone Wolf I love the wisdom yes I have to vote
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