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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
My heart hears the echo of past dreams resounding through the canyon My heart hears his whispering voice guiding me through the valley My heart hears the words he speaks reverberating through my soul My heart hears the sound of his footsteps walking through the scenes of life My heart hears his unwavering support coming through loud and clear My heart hears the wisdom of his words soothing all of my fears My heart hears the sound of his love whispering softly on the wind Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This is so gentle and beautiful. Bonnie |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LW~ this is so touching and gentle.....I really like this one.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
good poem jennifer. can feel the sentiment in this one. very well written. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very beautifully written  LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Beautifully said. He is with us all the time and this says it so gently. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Just wanted to say thank you to all who read this and took the time to reply. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Like the others, I love the gentle beauty I find in this one. I hope today finds you well and healing my friend. Miss you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Oh, so pretty and peaceful ... 'My heart hears the sound of his footsteps walking through the scenes of life' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Lone Wolf, I love this poem. It's beauty and simplicity are very compelling. You have my vote. fh |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
simple and well done... liked it...lovely If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely poem Lone Wolf! I love how you tie in "My heart hears," with such beautiful emotional expressions. In fact I love that line, "my heart hears." My vote's in! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent LW, you've done well with this one. . . Superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice lone wolf how nice it is to know that HE's with us always... wonderful love poem to the big man! dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Badaboom!!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very beautiful sentiments, Lone Wolf... lovely! regards, sudhir |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Just wanted to say thank you to all who took the time to red and reply. Your words are deeply appreciated. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
This is very good, Lone Wolf. I like it when I use both my mind and heart to hear things that cannot be heard otherwise. voted - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful and gracful LW... wonderful work... words of wisdom |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is beautiful Lone Wolf I love the wisdom yes I have to vote |
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