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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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When I paint My color drama wheels my bones, By pressuring overtones that stun. Slashing palette knife welding moans, I madly grin at what I've done. Sensuous blues, passionate reds, Vivacious adulterate greens. Gleans of black, apprehensions dread, Welded browns that anchor the scenes. Attacking canvas, raping prime, Climaxing sate, of love and hate, I've traumatized the now of time With layer on layer of weight. Painted my rage in tearing wear, Producing borealis bright The straining makes for tender fare When they premiere my dreams at night. This force of passion reigns my head. And it will, until I am dead. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A portrait in words about the painting of a painting with paint.... very nice Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written poem... liked it If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ To have the talent of artistry on canvas - combined with the artistry of phrases so beautifully describing the arts ... 'Sensuous blues, passionate reds, Vivacious adulterate greens. Gleans of black, apprehensions dread, Welded browns that anchor the scenes.' ... makes you a deeper shade of artist for sure !  Just YOU ... so vibrantly done ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The artist paints without a brush But with the visions in his mind And conjures up a canvas scene With all the passion deep inside The picture then produced in words Is of a landscape of his being And just as colorful a character Is the picture we are seeing Well written piece Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Interesting and well written. Enjoyed much. Thanks, Pete |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
A beautiful way for us to see an artist mind. Wonderful writting. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Prometheus, Thank you, nice comment. Avanti, Thank you for the vote. Marge, Beautiful comment, *L* Elizabeth, Well written comment, thank you for the vote. Love Sy Not a Poet, Thank you for the vote and interesting. Heather, Good comment and thanks for th e vote. |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
very interesting. good presentation P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great portrayal of the artist's emotions and needs to create. Just excellent work! You have got my vote on this one for sure..... PS I loved Elizabeth's comment, she captured the meaning so well..... take care.......ethome...... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Epoet, Thank you. Ethome, Yes she did. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow Seymour---- Terrific poem, and I wholly agree with what Marge said. Bonnie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, Thank you for the nice comment and vote. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
I've seen one of your paintings Sy and I can understand now where the passion comes from. Another fine piece and another vote. fh |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seymore...when you paint my dear (in your words) you open up a whole new world for your readers. Passion is definately not lost when you write and no book from Passions would ever be complete with out you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Fred and Hoot, I can only give my humble thanks for your warm comments and votes. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You too have quite a wonderful style of your own, dear Sy..  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
With such poetry as this, I could only imagine what beauty your painting might present.... Seymour, my friend, this is lovely poetry... regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Thank you sweet. *L* Sudhir, Thank you for the kind words and vote. |
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