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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I will become your hat, < !signature-->So I can snuggle in your hair all day long, I will become your lotion, So I can caress every inch of your skin, I will become your shoes, So I can walk with you a million miles, I will become your perfume, So I can be with you till the end of today I will become your breath. So that I can feel the warmth burning inside you, I will become your mirror, So that I can see your beauty, I will become your personal diary, So that you could unburden your heart and tell me all your thoughts, I will become you So we will never be lost again. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very nice. Heather Anne Miller/Gambler With God all things are possible. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
THat concept of beng just about every "thing" for her...I understand... well written |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That willingness to become all those things makes for the purest most uninhibited love. Well written from the heart. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
True love for sure. Lovely writing here!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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