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Xeonox
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since 2000-04-01
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0 posted 2000-07-19 01:38 AM


I will become your hat,
So I can snuggle in your hair all day long,
I will become your lotion,
So I can caress every inch of your skin,
I will become your shoes,
So I can walk with you a million miles,
I will become your perfume,
So I can be with you till the end of today
I will become your breath.
So that I can feel the warmth burning inside you,
I will become your mirror,
So that I can see your beauty,
I will become your personal diary,
So that you could unburden your heart and tell me all your thoughts,
I will become you
So we will never be lost again.

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Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).


[This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 07-19-2000).]

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Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
1 posted 2000-07-19 01:04 PM


Very nice.
Heather Anne Miller/Gambler


With God all things are possible.

AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
2 posted 2000-07-20 12:08 PM


THat concept of beng just about every "thing" for her...I understand...
well written

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-07-20 04:19 AM


That willingness to become all those things makes for the purest most uninhibited love. Well written from the heart.
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-07-21 08:55 PM


True love for sure.  Lovely writing here!!  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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