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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-07-13 07:13 PM


Passion an desire
Flow with hate.
Slowing down every-
Painstaking secound.

Hurting the soul-
Warning the heart,
Give strict precaustion-
Not to let anything in.

Hurting more from the-
Feeling of being alone.

I am in love,
Yet I know it isn't-
True.

© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
1 posted 2000-07-14 11:53 PM


ouch! to be in love yet know it's not true...
well written
I know well how frightning it's to be alone so many a times that's why we're in love

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Mike
Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-07-15 08:02 AM


Nicely written and expressed.  Enjoyed.
Geoffrey Sonnen
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142
Reading, PA USA
3 posted 2000-07-16 04:57 PM


Hurts. Yes, the One who leaves does not know what they are taking---your Heart. Wishing you Love that'll never leave.

Peace , Geoffrey

Heather Miller
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
4 posted 2000-07-27 10:49 PM


Been there am there  
hugs,
Heather< !signature-->

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no wonderful memeries to cherish.
With love it brings hurts and with hurts it brings bittersweet memories


[This message has been edited by Heather Miller (edited 07-27-2000).]

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