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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
When the moon breaks through on a cloudy night, Shining her special beauty for our delight, You sang to me of your distance past, And I realised I was home at last. You offered me the seagull's wing, So to the stars I might soar and sing, And if I heard the gull's cry, By our cape I'd know to fly. Our love is such a simple thing, Not filled with untruths wavering, But like our moon's pull on the tide, Our fingers touch, and hearts collide. I'm a moonbeam always by your side, Always close, I'm by your side, Although we are not together today, I'm with you always, only a heartbeat away... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful poem. You have my vote! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Isis~ I do love your poetry.... I think this is one of my favorites! -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Very tender Lisa! Hearts collide! Although we are not together today, I'm with you always, only a heartbeat away That says it all when we love someone! Only a heartbeat away |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Very tender, I liked this one, Isis. Regards, sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect Lisa... this one is SO YOU!!! and thats a sweet treat jm |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Isis..this was sweet! ~Heather |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Tender and so touching Isis ... straight from the heart, a lovely poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Glad you liked it it's one of my favs I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
tender and touching, yep, its got my vote |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
One of my favorite's of yours. |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Ahhh, the simple, uncomplicated face of love I like. Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
isis great job girl |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, you know that I have always loved this one. .. Wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A wonderful poem very nice |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven should hope you like it after all it was written for someone very special... Thanks I'm so glad everyone likes this one, it is special to me I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
This is a wonderful poem!...The third verse tore at my heart... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Lisa breathlessly beautiful. Lovely Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Isis~ It's easy to see why this would be a favorite of yours ... I like it so much too. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. I enjoyed. Chalk up one more vote. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone!!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Must agree with comments from others.. ~very nice~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Danny I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"Our love is such a simple thing, Not filled with untruths wavering, But like our moon's pull on the tide, Our fingers touch, and hearts collide." gotta love pure love dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks too DGVarner To believe In Karma, is to believe in Destiny. From birth to death every man is weaving thread by thread his destiny. Karma is brought about through |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
This is heavenly, I love it! marcy |
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