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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
This hull, this shell, this Living Hell This Love I lose for you refuse to share my Life to favor wife Devoid of you, annoying view confused deep blue unending hue to bruise anew To never touch what was so much To never hold ourselves as such as one in Life as one in Love and what is left is not enough |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a bit of romance, some angst, very interesting poem. Kathleen |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very well written... I hear ya dude.. Sometimes though it must be enough to simply emrace a new morning as a new challenge to conquer,, to see it thru till the next.. in the meantime...write,,, write,,,write,,,, you have a talent for it Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
wow, this has to be my favourite of all yours.. that I have read.. this is strong.. loved it.. You should submit this for the book, once you name it.. perhaps "Enough" or "Love I lose"?? ^_^ great writing.. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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