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since 2000-07-05Posts 142
Reading, PA USA
This hull, this shell, this Living Hell
This Love I lose for you refuse
to share my Life
to favor wife
Devoid of you, annoying view
confused deep blue
to bruise anew
To never touch what was so much
To never hold ourselves as such
as one in Life
as one in Love
and what is left
is not enough
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since 2000-04-06Posts 10263
a bit of romance, some angst, very interesting poem.
since 2000-06-26Posts 3168
Very well written... I hear ya dude..
Sometimes though it must be enough to simply emrace a new morning as a new challenge to conquer,, to see it thru till the next.. in the meantime...write,,, write,,,write,,,,
you have a talent for it
Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".
since 2000-04-13Posts 1462
wow, this has to be my favourite of all yours.. that I have read.. this is strong.. loved it..
You should submit this for the book, once you name it.. perhaps "Enough" or "Love I lose"?? ^_^
"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu
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