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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-07-10 05:52 PM

I am unfolding gently beneath
Your loving touch.


I let wholeness breath my
petals free.


Sweet fragrant Spirit touching
senses into life.


Giving beauty back to the Universe.


Each petal, sweet miracle of life.


We are hues of color, yet one
in Spirits blossom.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-10-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-10 06:10 PM

you are indeed a poetic rose my friend
just perfect Ellie...perfectly lovely
take care jm

I think I could need - this in my life
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
there's a little bit of something me
In everything in you

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-07-10 06:17 PM

Ellie, Please take my vote   This piece is beautiful!!   Excellent!

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-07-10 08:09 PM

Beautiful! I could almost smell it!  
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-07-11 03:57 AM

  Another masterpiece! Your talent never ceases to amaze me! Write On SIS!
Dennis :^)

[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 07-11-2000).]

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
5 posted 2000-07-11 07:02 AM

A most fragrant rose indeed!

regards sudhir

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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
6 posted 2000-07-11 07:12 AM


Love and hugs,

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
7 posted 2000-07-11 07:41 AM

Thank you, thank you, thank you, everyone for your most gracious replies!
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
8 posted 2000-07-11 09:07 AM

Oh Ellie you do have a way about you! And your writing of course    You got my vote ya do  
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
9 posted 2000-07-11 07:41 PM

thanks beck, how sweet of you!
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since 2000-02-04
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New York, USA
10 posted 2000-07-12 08:28 AM

Oh Ellie what a beautiful, wonderful, lovely, piece.  I could smell the fragrance and see the petals opening.  This is just so Ellie! Love it, Bonnie
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
11 posted 2000-07-12 08:31 AM

This is just as the rose is MOST PERFECT..well done

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
12 posted 2000-07-12 05:21 PM

bonnie and traci, I thank you very much for your kind words.
Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA
13 posted 2000-07-12 05:25 PM

Very well told, enjoyed it much.


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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
14 posted 2000-07-13 07:11 AM

very poetic!
great work!

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
15 posted 2000-07-13 07:18 AM

Such a blooming !
Beautiful !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~

Lady Lost
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

16 posted 2000-07-14 06:54 AM

Dear not, Avante, and Marge; thanks a bunch for your wondrous replies.

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
17 posted 2000-07-14 07:54 AM

Your rose encomases many aspects of life, in a few words
This is magnificent

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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

18 posted 2000-07-15 08:35 AM

beautiful poetry.  voted here.
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
19 posted 2000-07-15 09:18 PM

  I think that this woul;d make a lovely addition to any treasured book of poems-it's sop lovely--I hope it finds it's way in the upcoming book at passions.  David

Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

20 posted 2000-07-15 11:52 PM

Very beautiful, Ellie!


since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
21 posted 2000-07-16 08:04 AM

Ellie, Magnificent piece of rosy poetry

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.

Kit McCallum
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
22 posted 2000-07-24 10:26 AM

You lifted my spirits with this lovely verse Ellie ... beautiful!  

Best wishes,

Heather Miller
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
23 posted 2000-07-24 10:57 AM

What a wonderful way to think of a rose and love together

With God all things are possible.

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