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Little Angels.....There is no greater love (thanks Marge & Rex) |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Love is a child's embrace < !signature-->The loving smile upon their face Everything they touch and do The excitement of something new ~~ They light up a room With one small grin Everyone's hearts They soon win ~~ Precious little angels That sparkle and delight Fill our hearts with joy Make our world so bright ~~ There is no other love Greater than this No greater love Than a childs goodnight kiss ~~ Under the covers They tenderly lay To keep them safe Is all we pray ~~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
There is no other love Greater than this No greater love Than a childs goodnight kiss I second this Tracie BEAUTIFUL! Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Your Mommy heart is showing ... and that's a good thing ! How 'bout Love Is ... Little Angels ? Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Your Mommy heart is showing ... and that's a good thing ! How 'bout Love Is ... Little Angels ? Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I call this PERFECT so very sweet and adoring tracee.. you have captured the innocence well wonderfully tender poem jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautiful poem tracie ... and I agree with you ... whole-hearted Could the title to this be hidden in your own words ... second last verse 'No Greater Love' Rex [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful Tracie-- Only God's Love is Greater. I love it. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Even when they get older..there is no greater love... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
DA~ Thanks sweetie, you comments are appreciated Tracie~ Dear Marge & Rex Thankyou both for your wonderful help with the title as you can see I've changed it and I thank you both for helping Thanks also for taking the time to read and reply Love to you both Tracie~ Janny You little sweetie Thanks hon for such a dear reply luv ya Tracie~ Jamie~ So glad you liked it and thanks for your comments...appreciate them Tracie~ PdV~ You are so right thanks hon Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Tracy... You have depicted such a beautiful image of love, it's so nice when the couple all feel for each other heart to heart... I really love it. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This is so sweet, those little ones are so precious, and you've captured that well in this. Bonnie |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A lovely poem indeed... Tracie, this is a gem... Warm regards, sudhir |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
James~ Thanks for such lovley comments Tracie~ Bonnie~ Yes indeed precious..thanks Tracie~ Sudhir Thanks so much for your kind comments Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
lovely poem... truly thee is no greater love If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Avanti~ Thank you very much for your lovely comments, much appreciated Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Definitely a treasure piece here....poets always get me with the stuff about children!!! Very sweet!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks Bridgette I appreciate you lovely comments Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
oh I LOVE little kids! Great poem! ~H |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Lovely and sweet Tracie. Thanks, Pete |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
H~ Thanks for reading hon, much appreciated Tracie~ Pete~ Glad you like this piece and I appreciated you taking the time to read it..thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful and endearing Tracie and well inspired that's for sure....Very very well done I loved it!.....take care...ethome |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
ethome~ Hi Thanks for your most lovely comments I really do appreciate them...thanks Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Tracie, just absolutly perfect. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very lovely!!!!!! LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beverley~ Thanks alot so pleased you liked this Tracie~ Heather~ Thanks for your lovely comment Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Nice poem. . .and I agree by the way. The little ones are what it's all about. fh |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tracie...what a sincere and beautiful prayer and one we could and should all echo each night before bed |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Very very lovely, my votes in. Parker |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's so true there is no greater love and you have described wonderfully here. Those precious little hearts burrow right into our very soul....Very well done! Got my vote! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Fred~ Thanks for your lovley comments I appreciate it Ruth~ I agree..children whether they are our own or not are the most precious gift god could ever give..thanks Ruth Tracie~ Parker~ Thanks for reading and voting appreciate it Tracie~ ethome~ Couldn't agree more...thanks alot I appreciate it tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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