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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2000-07-09 04:33 PM

It's Late

It's late you said
It's late I said
Stay a while
It's late you said
It's late

Goodnight you said
Sleep well
Goodnight I said
I want you
Goodnight you said
Sleep well

I'll go then you said
It's late
Too late I said
Too late
Goodbye you said

You're gone now I said
Too late
You're gone from me
Too Late
It hurts I said
Too late

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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-09 05:14 PM

Too is so sad
well done


Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2000-07-10 10:55 AM

I can remember times like this
'twas a whole life time ago but it's surprising how memories can be sparked through the reading of well written poetry
nicely done Bev


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3 posted 2000-07-10 11:50 AM

Such a sad poem, but so true in life.  Well written, well done.  Good job facing realities as they are.

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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-07-21 01:10 AM

this is sad...  

love just gets right away from us sometimes aye..


"i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner

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since 2000-01-18
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5 posted 2000-07-21 03:03 AM

So does hurt when we are passed by *HuG*

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

since 2000-04-12
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Backwaters of Avalon
6 posted 2000-07-21 06:03 AM

Love hurts when it bends, you have expressed it so well through such a few words.. excellent piece

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.

since 2000-07-09
Posts 97
7 posted 2000-07-21 08:42 AM

Thank you Prometheus, i tried so I'm glad you liked it.

Rex as always your praise is always welcome even if I don't deserve it, and I know I don't. Thanks for reading it.

Musicmaker thank you very much.

Dg Dee thanks, not a patch on yours but I'm getting there.  

Tracie you are far too kind to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

James yes that's it, bent out of shape, but like a rubber ball it's coming together again.

Heather Miller
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
8 posted 2000-07-21 01:25 PM

Very sad, but Very well put.......

With God all things are possible.

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