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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
It's Late It's late you said Goodnight It's late I said Stay a while It's late you said It's late Goodnight you said Sleep well Goodnight I said I want you Goodnight you said Sleep well I'll go then you said It's late Too late I said Too late Goodbye you said Goodbye You're gone now I said Too late You're gone from me Too Late It hurts I said Too late |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Too bad...it is so sad well done Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I can remember times like this 'twas a whole life time ago but it's surprising how memories can be sparked through the reading of well written poetry nicely done Bev  Rex |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Such a sad poem, but so true in life. Well written, well done. Good job facing realities as they are. /¯¯\ /¯¯\ | ¥ | [email protected] \ Sheri / \Rob / Created by: Muad'dib \ / \/ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is sad...  love just gets right away from us sometimes aye.. dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
So sad...it does hurt when we are passed by *HuG* Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Love hurts when it bends, you have expressed it so well through such a few words.. excellent piece - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Thank you Prometheus, i tried so I'm glad you liked it. Rex as always your praise is always welcome even if I don't deserve it, and I know I don't. Thanks for reading it. Musicmaker thank you very much. Dg Dee thanks, not a patch on yours but I'm getting there.  Tracie you are far too kind to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. James yes that's it, bent out of shape, but like a rubber ball it's coming together again. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very sad, but Very well put....... LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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