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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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An apple a day Time rings out for you and me Outside the garden and the tree. Served a plate of expedite From an apple and a bite. Now we blunder in a daze, Full of roads that form a maze. Spading sand against the tide, Time and tide that we abide. In this circle of extreme Like a fantasy or dream, Time and term and term again Filled with longing and Amen. Change continues into strange Ever making the exchange Till the sun will pass away Serving apples on a tray And we eat one every day Just to pass the term away. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Spading sand against the tide, Time and tide that we abide. I like that. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sey, you rarely fail to make me smile with your work. This one was no exception! Served a plate of expedite. Is an awesome line!!! Chris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Prometheus and Chris, Thanks for the comment and vote. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Can't pick a favorite line, loved the whole poem....Great piece. Bonnie |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
well written. enjoyed. |
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