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Out of Passion

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-07-06 08:01 PM

I shall never give thee up out of rage
But out of passion
To love another

The rage I hold inside
Will not be shed in your eyes
For that I am to loving
For such cruelty

Yet you are no
Yet you are not afraid to hurt me

You seem almost souless
Impure and deciteful
I will no longer endure your pain

I will give you up out of passion

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

1 posted 2000-07-07 01:31 AM

Very well said Neala!
Out of passion you leave. I really like this
one a lot! Much enjoyed

~Sheri

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

2 posted 2000-07-07 11:46 AM

very nice

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-07-07 12:02 PM

beautiful Neala,
I'm so glad you submited this
one of your best
very well written
take care
jm

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

4 posted 2000-07-07 07:24 PM

Thank you glad you liked it!
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2000-07-08 07:27 AM

Wow, nicely said!!!

enjoyed! voted

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

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