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April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

0 posted 2000-07-06 12:08 PM

True loneliness
     Having love, but not being able to see it.
True sadness
     Seing love, but not being able to hold it.
True heartache
     Holding love, but not being able to feel it.
True loss
     Feeling love, but not being able to show it.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

1 posted 2000-07-06 03:33 AM

April, you have hit this nail RIGHT on the head!
So much said here in so few words!
VERY well done Miss!

~Sheri

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-07-06 06:03 AM

I have to agree with irie, much is said in this short little gem....well done
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

3 posted 2000-07-06 10:33 AM

Wow....Really good! Short and sweet yet full of impact! Good Job!

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

4 posted 2000-07-06 10:41 AM

A simple verse that says so much. This is great. Bonnie

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

5 posted 2000-07-08 12:59 PM

Thank you so much for the wonderful replies! I had posted this one months ago, but decided to submit it for the book, and let people from other places than the teen forums see it. Now I'm glad I did. Thank you again for the kind replies!
April

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-07-08 05:48 PM

Superb April. . .

The power of words. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Geoffrey Sonnen
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 142
Reading, PA USA

7 posted 2000-07-08 10:42 PM

This is very good, unfortunately it is also very true. "How do you mend a broken Heart...". Thank you for sharing.

Beverley
Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 97
England

8 posted 2000-07-09 11:54 AM

I really loved the poem it was beautiful in the true sense

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

9 posted 2000-07-09 01:57 PM

True and lovely

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

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