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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
When life seems too befuddlin' Take time to do some spuddlin' Go splashin' while it's puddlin' Go barefoot in the rain. When things are poor to middlin' And both your thumbs are twiddlin' Stand on your head while fiddlin' For smi-l-in' out loud!! When all about are snigglin' Get all your toes a'wigglin' Then soon you will be gigglin' Your doldrum's sure to wane. When things get willy-nilly Do something brash and silly Eat ice-cream with your chili For smi-l-in' out loud! When day's are feelin' maudlin Watch baby ducklings waddlin' There's always one that's dawdlin' That's no time for disdain When life is too befuddlin' Make time to go out spuddlin' That's splashin' while it's puddlin' For smi-l-in' out loud!!! [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well this certainly turns a frown upside down Good, happy poem Nan! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'll never forget this delightful piece! Denise |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Won't forget this classic. An absolute must for the book...... |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Agree, agree, agree.....one of your cheeriest! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
When life seems too befuddlin' Take time to do some spuddlin' Go splashin' while it's puddlin' On the vote button I won't be fumblin' while I'm gigglin' on the floor LOL Love it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ I love it when life gives us a reason to smile. Thanks for this little gem. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
This gives you a reason to smile in the rain. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nan~ this was really fun to read.....almost like Mary Poppins was singing it in my head! (silly, yes but that's the feel of it for me) Anyway........ *****VOTE***** -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
LOVE happy poems Nan! Another vote counted. . . fh |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
the title alone would make me vote, the rest of the poem is just more whip creme...love this nan....wish i could write happy poems as nice as this.... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Whatcha grinning about this time??? Love this one... votes in, for smilin' out loud! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I have a smile, from ear to ear you have my vote Nan Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Just a wonderfully cheerful poem. Thanks for making me smile. Pete |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
You sure make it difficult to keep up the persona of a dark, brooding poet. Damn feet are tapping and my face is in this really wierd configuration... kinda like this: Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Where's my coke?? (coke and a smile) Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Awesome!!! LOL, smilin here! (But can I pass on the ice cream and chili? Yuck!) |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Gotta love this one, any poem with the word "spuddlin'" in it has to be good!!!! Bonnie [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Loved this the first time I read it Nan ... love it more still! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This definately puts a SMILE on this frowny face of mine....thank you...Nan!!!! I really enjoyed this one a lot!!!! Take Care Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I was just hopping around Voices reading the old submissions and I came across this and remembered the title and decided to check it out and guess what....It's going to be in Reflections as Spuddlin' LOL!!!! I like your new title better but, the old one is cute too!!!! Bridgette |
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