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since 2000-06-25
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Peterborough, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2000-07-04 10:31 AM

Listen to the beating
Of His broken heart
Listen to it breaking
As it tears apart.

Listen to the beating
As He calls your name
Begging you to answer
It's for you He came.

Listen to the beating
Of the Heart of Love
Calling you to come home
A home built in love.

Listen to the beating
Of His saddened heart
Weeping for the innocent
Who have been torn apart.

Listen to the beating
As He tells His church
"It's not long now, My return
When you will end your search."

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| __\_\_o____/_|

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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
1 posted 2000-07-05 10:18 AM

A big AMEN to that! His return is certainly closing in. Superb writing  
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 2000-07-05 10:54 PM

Excellent writing, musicmaker, with a good message  
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
3 posted 2000-07-05 11:18 PM

I think this is great! A definate for the book.   (thank you WhtDove for showing me this one!)   ***VOTE***   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

Poet deVine
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-07-06 12:10 PM

Very thought provoking and thoughtful poem. I enjoyed it and the message.  
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 2000-07-06 12:53 PM

Hmmm yes very thought provoking... and beautiful writing!! enjoyed it much  

It's been
too many nights
of being with

to now be suddenly

Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
6 posted 2000-07-06 01:27 AM

thanx for the link by a certain someone or i'd a missed this one yuh i like it lots
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
7 posted 2000-07-06 01:37 AM

you've done a lovely job with this poem
and excellent subject matter


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since 2000-01-18
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8 posted 2000-07-06 06:12 AM

Wonderful message, wonderful poem..well done

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
9 posted 2000-07-06 08:16 PM

Nice work, Musicmaker..
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