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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Haiku for Sam - I will watch for you tonight my friend. Twinkling Soul Body Insulted- Earth-bound soul is springing free to twinkle tonight Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent Jamie perfect tribute piece your heart shines in it as well as his take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
well done. enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ Such a sweet thought ... and the sky is twinkling with the stars of my remembrance too. I appreciate this little jewel. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Cool Haiku...  K |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
*Sam* ............hugss <**> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is gorgeous Jamie... A wonderful tribute.. Well done! It's been too many nights of being with to now be suddenly without "Jewel" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Very beautiful Jamie, a tribute from the heart that shines with every word. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A beautiful little haiku Jamie Take care Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Many thanks to each of you. Your kindness speaks volumes. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
((((((((((((((((((Jamie))))))))))))))))))) <**> |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Tanga,, your kind thoughts are appreciated. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A wonderful sentiment Jamie. Good choice for the book. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Marina, Thank you for the sweet words. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very lovely Prometheus ... so eloquently spoken in so few words. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Helix New Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 2 |
Your poem has the soul of wit. Enjoyed it. |
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Helix New Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 2 |
Your poem has the soul of wit. Enjoyed it. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
such strong expression in such few words! Kathleen |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
To Kit, Helix, and Irish Rose; Many thanks to you- your kindness is appreciated. Thanks for taking the time to read and reply to my poems. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Very beautiful and even though haikus are so "short", I fully uderstood and "felt" with you. Peace, Geoff |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
geoff--- thank you so much, and welcome to passions. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simplicity at its finest...just beautiful. Bonnie |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I want to Haiku too! Lovely...teach me! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..what an awesome thought.. like this much..!dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
BSC-- Thanks so very much. You are very kind. PDV-- I am sure teach is the wrong word for you..just pointing in the general direction would get you there... dgvarner--thank you very much... ( are you, as am I , a reader of Gibran?... "He who has not looked on Sorrow will never see Joy"---- one of my favorites Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW Hey I just wrote my first haiku... cool eh?  great haiku, haiku-master regards sudhir |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jamie: YES! i love THE PROPHET! unfortunately its the only one i've read thru entirely (about 3 times)..and flipped thru dozens of times..!! but i have one other (quotes of his) called SAND AND FOAM(well, i guess i've read that one thru too..)..want to read more..he was so wise, and so profound! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent haiku Jamie!! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Jamie,a haiku about a man who is not just satisfied to the confines of his body...his soul yearns to travel places...did i get this haiku right?nonetheless,this was a thoughtful piece of work and i am glad to have read this |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Kaile-- This was written the day a close friend passed away...after living many years with a multitude of ailments of which he never complained. |
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