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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Standing alone on the terrace her face lit by a single lamp rain splashing her gently her dress transparent caused by damp watchful eyes appraised her from inside as she and the rain danced as one the silhouette the tapping of her heels synchronised beating of his heart had begun completely unaware of the vision she made she lifted her face to the light he glimpsed a smile and heard her laugh turning to face him - he felt passion ignite The voice telling him to take this chance he opened the door with almost no sound as they moved together and began to dance orchestrated raindrops splashing the ground A single owl whispered in the night air bodies locking - retreating then advancing silk slipping off leaving her bare In the moonlight, shadows dancing... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So sensual and romantic...the imagery wonderful...but how can I vote for it? I want to vote!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I'm so glad you are posting in this forum. This is a vote from me on this well remembered poem Liz |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh yes, Rainbow! I remember it well...perhaps that's because it's unforgettable! Now if you will hit the appropriate button, I will vote for it! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Which button??????? If that's not a rude question...LOL..ooops |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RainbowGirl~ mark the box for book submission!!!!!! I want to vote!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
OK everybody!!! She figgered out the right button! VOTE!!!!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl~ Ya is one smatz gal !  For a brunette ! I remember this one well. BEAUTIFULLY DONE ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm back to vote~ *****VOTE***** -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I also recall this poem of yours and it is still wonderful The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Rainbow, this is gorgeous, it dances!! you got my vote!Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
What a beautiful picture you paint! ~Heather |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
ummmmm ...loved it Cindy philip |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is one of my very favorites of yours, glad to see you post it |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Best time and place to have that dance! I love this! Gossamerwings |
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