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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Such bright in the dimmness Amongst the brown and green Running blue flows wild nearby Friendly shadows in a trance All is warm and free In such delicate harmony Perfection in a dream Soft carresses An easy touch Sparks a flame of desire One swaying in the wind Closeness as one with all Life in full circle, delicate Songs of flesh echoeing In the moment of time All worlds combine together Catching all in hypnotic dance Joy love and peace unite A picture of truth All in a mystery < !signature--> "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love this images that come to mind with this! Beautiful!  -SEA |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"In the moment of time All worlds combine together Catching all in hypnotic dance" Lovely JustBleu ... I particularly liked the lines above, very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Vivid imagery! I liked it...though the green font made it hard to read for me.  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I agree the green was hard to read!! Here ya go this should be easier!!!! Bridgette |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
lovely and sensual imagery and emotions perfect choice jm |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I liked the poem, thought the gaps between lines made it a bit awkward, and you had some typos......(I am only telling ya cuz it's a book submission  )but other than the minor stuff this was great ~Heather |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank ya everyone!! |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Very soothing Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Very nice. I like what I see from you Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Eric Thank You bunches!!! I love your quote....Willy Wonka is sooo cool!! Oompa, OOmpa.....anywayz!!  JP Thank you too!!! I'm having way too much fun tonight!! My Mom has always said, I'm silly!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is a lovely verse...it reads just as well backward as forward...beautiful thoughts! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
beautiful verse... well written If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
A sweet poem...i know this is going in the book.. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Claire....that's cool, I read it backwards after you responded and yeah it does sound good that way too!!! Avanti Thanks for your kind thoughts!! Christopher you seem to be postive...Thanks!! We will see!! Bridgette < !signature--> "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Bridgette! Absolutely beautiful! I'm glad Claire mentioned the reading it backwards thing! So cool! I'll have to start reading others backwards now too! Denise p.s. Did I ever mention how much I love your name? I think I did. It was also my great grandmother's name. It's one of my all time favorite names! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow a beautiful poem, lovely dream like images. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Denise...yeah it is cool read backwards!! That is cool that your Grandmother had the same name as I do!! Thank You for sharing that with me!!! Brian, Thanks for your thoughts about lovely dreamlike images!!! Cool!! About your quote...I know Joy Division's music a little bit...the lyrics are very deep, dark pieces of poetry!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
shhhhh I am bumping this back to the top I liked this too well to let it get lost *hugs* ~Heather |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great piece with vivid imagery. Great Job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
LOL, K, X Angel I'll be very quiet!! Thank You!! Kelieth, Thank You so much!!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is about a true and very memorable night in my life!!! Thanks again you all!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Bridgette, absolutely beautiful. If I wasn't typing I'd stand up and applaud, lol. I'm new here and I tell ya, I'm in awe of some of the stuff I've read and this was one of them. Thanks for sharing, Juls |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Justblue, loved the images. My vote is in, and the idea of reading it backwards Parker |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Just gorgeous. Making Love within the beauty of nature. Sounds good to me ! Very nicely phrased and visually sumptuous. Thanks for the journey ! Peace, Geoffrey |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very nice. I have loved the ones I've read from you....All seem to be really great so far. Haven't found one yet I haven't loved. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Peaceful and well written! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Geoffrey you've got it on the nose!!! Heather that is great to hear you like my writing in general!! And Toddles thanks!! Thank You everyone for the comments!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oops Juliet and Parker Thank You to you too!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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