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Di Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19Ontario, Canada |
She sure is pretty She makes heads turn I can see why you'd want her How she'd cause your loins to burn. She's radiant and beautiful Causes weakness in the knees Men sweat as she passes Oh, she's just such a tease. You are the envy of all This is so true You're a handsome couple There's nothing I can do. But will she wash your clothes and iron them? Rub your back and pluck your ears? Listen how your day went? And kiss away your tears? She must be something special You chose her over me I wonder if she'll love you But I have to set you free. I wasn't enough to keep you You needed more than me I hope that she was worth it Are you happy as can be? A better pair I've yet to see Nothing could be finer But the cowboy of my dreams Traded me in for a Freightliner!! ~Di~ ~People shine from the inside out~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Di, you pluck ears?  I'm yours!!!  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL..ok...I'm getting a visual!!! Cute!  |
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Di Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19Ontario, Canada |
Yup, have to pluck those unsightly hairs lol. Give me the tweezers and let me at 'em!! It IS really a nice truck though lol... It would have been much more insulting had it been an ugly truck no???? Have to have a sense of humour about these things  Thanks for the comments, they make me smile ~People shine from the inside out~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, it coulda been a Peterbuilt! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Di! Well written! Denise |
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Di Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19Ontario, Canada |
Thank you Denise I appreciate you reading me. ~People shine from the inside out~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Di ... you actually made me laugh out loud ... if that was not your intent then I am sorry ... but thanks for posting this well done ... 'vote'  Rex |
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Di Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19Ontario, Canada |
Yes Rex that was my intention, and I'm glad it worked! ~People shine from the inside out~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Bump!! for another turn... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hey Poet deVine, Thanks for bumping this one... I had missed reading this fabulous poem.... Di, great work... hope to see more poems from you... regards, sudir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You told it like it is but with such style.. great poem....reminds me of a couple of lines from a song by ..The Little River Band.. "The other guy won't be around to talk to the kids He won't pick you up when you're down the way that I did." I wrote a poem about this kind of thing it's posted in open 9 It's called Skin Deep so I know how you feel. voting |
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Di Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19Ontario, Canada |
Thanks for the bump Poet deVine Thanks for taking the time to read me Sudhir. I'm pleased that you liked it. Dear ethome, I had fun writing it. I'll be sure to "check you out" as well. Thanks for your kind words. P.S. I think he may be sorry he traded me *S* ~People shine from the inside out~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well Di, do not despair, it seems he made a bad deal......( do you really pluck ears?) how about clipping nails????...lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Di Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19Ontario, Canada |
Hey Jamie,Yup...even plucked his ears lol. Took the tweezers to them. He did how own nails though...You have to draw the line somewhere ya know!!! ~People shine from the inside out~ |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Hi, Di, isn't it supposed be a sad poem, how come I laughed from start to end? ^_^ and I didn't know you pluck ears and do massage?.. hehe.. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Hi, Di, isn't it supposed be a sad poem, how come I laughed from start to end? ^_^ and I didn't know you pluck ears and do massage?.. hehe.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Di Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19Ontario, Canada |
Hi James Yes, in fact this SHOULD be a sad story..and in real life, it was. I think there's too much "sad" in real life. It's a natural response but sometimes it's ok to look at the lighter side. For me, laughter is the best times. ~People shine from the inside out~ |
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