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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State 
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Tonight~ I wished upon a star The brightest one I could see Brilliant~ As if shouting out loud “Please, come wish upon me!” Hypnotic~ I’m left gazing Staring into the night Mesmerized~ By your wonder Fascinated by your sight Twinkling~ Happy and full of life Celebrating how free you fly Promising~ So bold and strong Outshining the rest in the sky Blazing~ Are you there Do you really still burn? Infinite~ I beg you to be Please give me what I yearn Peacefully~ Smiling at me from afar Yet somehow you seem so near Serene~ You quietly speak to me Almost whispering in my ear Silently~ Cradle me in your light Please give to me what I wish Gentle~ Illumination reaches out On my cheek placing a kiss Smiling~ I’m left dreaming Of my wish I sent to you Wondering~ How long I shall wait? Forever, ‘till my wish comes true Tonight~ I wished upon a star The brightest one I could see You~ My love, are that shinning star And I wished for you to fall upon me |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, this is a real beauty, Irie! Wonderfully written!  Denise |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Stars are really beautiful. I liked this. Joy |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!!!  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Blazing with the intensity of the stars... this is as beautiful as their light. Chris |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Irie. . . May you get your wish and fall for the star that you wish upon. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Denise, Joy, Sharon, Chris & John! Many, Many Thanks to ALL of you for your warm and wonderful comments! ~Sheri |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
As beautiful as the stars are distant. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
enjoyed this sparking gem much... very lovely imagery great writing and presentation take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Irie~ So wistfully penned. A lovely wish. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Irie~ So wonderfully dreamy...loved the imagery you produced with this, excellent read..well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Must agree with the others, this is really nice. The style makes it flow so well and it enhances the fascination of wishing upon a star. Of course, the imagery makes possible the wish to become reality. ~~nice writing~~ would be a nice addition to any poetry bood! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Jamie, Janet, Marge, Tracie & Danny, Great big thanks to you all for your warm and kind comments! They mean a lot to me!  Thanks again! This sparkling gem is my star!  ~Sheri |
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Tepok Bopar Junior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 27 |
This is a wonderful piece Irie. The path to fullfilment is sometimes a long one. I hope your dreams come true. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Such wonderful emotions flowing here very nicely done Rex |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Thanks Tepok and Welcome to Passions! I do hope you enjoy it here! And a great big thanks to you too Rex. Warm thank you's to you both! ~Sheri |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
No reply neccesary here *V |
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T Member
since 2000-04-27
Posts 107USA |
I like this. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I loved this one when you first wrote it. It moves in me the same way today. Wonderful poem - no one should have to wait "forever", I'm sure you won't, either. Michael |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Irie! The style and flow in this lovely poem compliment the dreamy, mystical sentiments you've penned. Just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Jeffrey, T, Michael & Kit, Thank you all for you comments! You're all so much appreciated by me! And hey Michael, this is the first time I've posted this one, just wrote it! Wondering if you're speaking of another poem? Again, Big thanks to you ALL!!!!!! ~Sheri |
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bad little dog Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 38city pound |
beautiful poem ... but you're best to look before you lie down in the grass < !signature-->voted on a star Ruff Bow Wow Grrrrrrrrrrr [This message has been edited by bad little dog (edited 07-09-2000).] |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
this is the first time i am reading you but i'm gald i did... this is such wonderful imaginery... lovely work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This my dear, is a work of art!!! Definantly one of your softer ones.. I love it girl!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Bad Little Dog, I think I know what you're saying......and if that's that case, then I always do. AVANTI, Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed! Devina, A work of art huh? Well, We'll just see about that! Thanks to you all for responding to my post! Warm hugs to you all! ~Sheri |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Irie, This is beautiful poetry, lovely flow, great writing... enjoyed this very much... regards, sudhir |
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aleisha Junior Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 10 |
Irie, this poem is truly beautiful. excellent expression my best firend. love you |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sudhir, Thankyou so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed! Aleisha, Thanks so much hun! Nice to see you here again. I'm glad you liked this one! Hope to see you soon! Love to you and the family! ~Sheri |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Lovely sentiments...Me LIKES!!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
somehow I thought I had read this before...or maybe I did and just didn't reply??? This was wonderful! ~H |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Beautiful!!!!!!!!!! LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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