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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Ride With Me Ride with me if you dare see what I see. Ride on a tail of a slippery wind, sliding in and out, to and fro. Come sail through a valley, skim a roof top see men toil, with no end in sight, keep riding with me see what I see. Ride with me were man has stopped the changing of the land, were he has not yet set foot, ride with me you will see. Race the birds with places to go, see the fawn with no fear. See mother nature free of mans mark upon the land, take the chance see what I see. Follow a steam into a lake float across the water feel its coolness smell the freshness, do you now see what I see. See mother nature at her best feel the freeness of your spirit. Now wake up, you are back in your make believe happy little existence. Want to take another ride? By, Cerenity |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Felt the sting from this piece! Pretty strong message with a lot of meaning. Do you mean to tell me there is a beautiful place left of this earth where man has not built condominiums and a McDonalds? If so, yes, would love to take a ride there. Sounds to good to be true! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Danny, Well im not sure but in my heart I believe that there will always be some where like this that the soul can take a breath of fresh air and see the earth the way it is supose to be. Thanks for you kind words, Love Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Enjoyed the tour! jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful ride, Cerenity!  Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thought provoking!  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thanks so much for your words of kindness. I was taking a mental ride in my mind when I wrote this so I am very pleased that the poem gets that feeling across to my readers. Love, Cerenity |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
A trip I'd like to take, beautiful. Bonnie |
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