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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-07-03 11:43 AM



Ride With Me  


Ride with me if you dare
see what I see. Ride on a
tail of a slippery wind,
sliding in and out, to and
fro.

Come sail through a valley,
skim a roof top see men toil,
with no end in sight, keep
riding with me see what I see.

Ride with me were man has
stopped the changing of the
land, were he has not yet
set foot, ride with me you will
see.

Race the birds with places to
go, see the fawn with no fear.
See mother nature free of mans
mark upon the land, take the
chance see what I see.

Follow a steam into a lake float
across the water feel its coolness
smell the freshness, do you now
see what I see.

See mother nature at her best
feel the freeness of your spirit.
Now wake up, you are back in
your make believe happy little
existence.

Want to take another ride?


By,  Cerenity


© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-07-03 01:16 PM


Felt the sting from this piece!  Pretty strong message with a lot of meaning.  Do you mean to tell me there is a beautiful place left of this earth where man has not built condominiums and a McDonalds?
If so, yes, would love to take a ride there. Sounds to good to be true!

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-07-03 01:26 PM


Hi Danny,

Well im not sure but in my heart I believe that there will always be some where like this that the soul can take a breath of fresh air and see the earth the way it is supose to be.

Thanks for you kind words,  
Love  Cerenity


[This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 07-03-2000).]

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
3 posted 2000-07-03 01:33 PM


Enjoyed the tour!
jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-07-03 05:52 PM


Beautiful ride, Cerenity!  

Denise

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2000-07-03 09:20 PM


Thought provoking!    
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
6 posted 2000-07-03 10:13 PM


Hi Everyone,

Thanks so much for your words of kindness. I was taking a mental ride in my mind when I wrote this so I am very pleased that the poem gets that feeling across to my readers.

Love,  Cerenity

BSC
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Posts 2919
New York, USA
7 posted 2000-07-03 10:31 PM


A trip I'd like to take, beautiful.  Bonnie
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