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kaile
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0 posted 2000-07-02 10:27 PM


Locked
under
bolt
and
key,

yet
tranquil
mind
travels
places

© Copyright 2000 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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1 posted 2000-07-03 01:42 AM


another one with interesting, thought provoking format...I like!

Tell me - what interested you more - the literal or the metaphoric interpretation?

K

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-07-03 02:17 AM


Hey Kaile, Wow loved this!! Well done  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"


Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2000-07-03 11:29 PM


now ain't that the truth

Rex

Mike
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4 posted 2000-07-04 06:55 PM


nicely expressed.
kaile
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5 posted 2000-07-20 11:26 AM


thanx all for replying im glad you liked
Heather Miller
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6 posted 2000-07-20 11:31 AM


Very moving with little words  )
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
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7 posted 2000-07-20 11:48 AM


It does say a lot in a few words.

Thanks,
Pete

epoet
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8 posted 2000-07-20 09:33 PM


a mind can never be locked away as long as the heart wants to live.

P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love


Jamie
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Blue Heaven
9 posted 2000-07-21 04:13 PM


very nice..
reminds me of something a pow once said...
wish i could remember it exactly

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
10 posted 2000-08-07 02:23 PM


..the mind can travel when the body cannot..

very powerful little ditty  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
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11 posted 2000-08-07 02:28 PM


like this, it is so true, and yes the mind is free to fly when the body is safe
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