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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Splendid is the dawn with the choir of birdsong singing the awakening of the sun. Heralding a new summers day that unfolds her splendor in lush and verdant flora. Petals open to receive the kiss of sunbeams effervecent light that dances on the waters surface in a sparkling ballet to the symphony of summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Dear Ellie, I still love this beautiful poem, makes this rainy morning a little brighter. Bonnie |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Simply beautiful and touching Ellie! I adore this verse and it's tender images! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!  |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a wonderful poem! Nature often sings the best songs, even if they are silent.  "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow i like this im gonna have to give it a thumbs up yuh |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful uplifting verse hon I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I want to spend summer where you are! Actually, wait, I'd have to leave here? Never mind. A gratifying read.Mike |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SPLENDID INDEED!!! this one is a fav of mine by you... and so perfect to reflect your work.. laways so lovely in its imagery of natures beauty and God's love... its just so ELLIE!!! and that is the best part jm |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
ahhhh nature! encore! encore! lovely poem  ~Heather |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh how beautiful!! I love this!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, Since the butterflies can't sing your praise, I will! This is SPLENDID! You are such a talented writer. Keep up the fantastic work, Bro Dennis :^) |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
This poem sings to my soul. You've got another nature lover smiling Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A lovely piece of poetry that would brighten anyone's day. I love this one Liz |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ellie, It is no secret to you or others that I have great admiration of your abilities to write wonderfully insightful poems as based on the beauties of this world. I also have come to truly appreciate you as a beautiful person and friend. Knowing of the beauty & heart behind the lines, I gladly cast a vote for you- and hope to see this and other great poems included in the book. God bless you, David |
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Elyse Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 414Apex (think raleigh) NC |
pretty. I just wonder why its a Silent song. oh well. luv Elyse |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! This is by far my favourite poem by you. Words are not enough to tell you how magical and beautiful and simply incredibly written this was! Without a doubt, this has my vote Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Ellie, I enjoy reading your poetry and this one is a excellent choice, very well done. Beautifully written. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful poem! It belongs in our book! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
beautiful poem. I enjoyed it very much. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ellie there's not much that hasn't been said here! Magnificent! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful poem Ellie. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Well done! Beautiful and uplifting. Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Just lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is gorgeous... definite vote from me! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful soft flowing poem...Lovely Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
wow |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
thank you for your lovely replies, I feel so honored by all the kind comments! Ellie |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Just needed another sweet read |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Thanks, Bonnie...love ya! Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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