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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Jonah whale I have been Jonahed by a whale. Ingested like a common ale. By smacking lips and hardy slurp Assassinated by a burp. My heart was hers. A lavaliere. My words found refuge in her ear. Her finger wore my ring of dreams. Before her feet my best of schemes. Toasted in sweet wine of notions, Filled with blended lovers potions. Pledged our bridle troth forever, Swore an oath to never sever. But the lavaliere turned a yoke. And the ring of dreams turned to smoke My honeyed words ran foul her ears. And promises vanished in fears. The guillotine a sharpened why? Dropped the blade to sever the lie. Once cut the crimson flowed unpenned, Once cut our love could never mend. If end there be, then let it be, I'll sail with the whale out to sea. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 07-02-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Where is the vote box seymore? This pathos should be in the book. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Mark this for voting, so I can vote for it! You better!  Mike |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Prometheus and Bsquirrel, I thank you both for your great comments and your votes. |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Edit the poem and tick the box to submit it for the book PLEASE! So we can all vote for it Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, an oldie but goodie! Wish I could vote for it..... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Hon ... begging you to SUBMIT ! Oh, yeah ... and enter the poem in the voting arena too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I'm waiting for this to be submitted. Sy, click the edit box then chech the box above the poem to submit. Can't vote withoutit Loved the poem Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Craig, Balladeer, Marge and Elizabeth I thank you all for the nice comments and Liz I can't seem to find the edit box or the box above. Love Sy PS. I found it. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 07-02-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NOW ! That's better ! Love you to pieces ! So glad to see you are 'submissive'!  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Thanks! Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge and Craig, I am the one to thank you for the votes. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, A whale ha, you have my vote with this beauty. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, Thank you so much for the vote. |
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