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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tender Render ~*Marge Tindal*~  The tender render from your pen picked me up and took me in clamoring the recesses of your mind that I could only hope to find Within your quill I feel the thrill of life colored with your ink Take me on to life beyond living on your brink Drop me on the shoreline of your castle's built so fine Let me feel the ocean's roar tide surging from you forevermore Lift me to the mountain crest view sunlight setting in the West Melting snow on covered hills unfurl now the daffodils Spreading chestnut branches wide shading all you feel inside Rest with me in hammock made between the branches of her shade To the rill of valleys wide babbling brook of your inside Enjoin me in the searching foray of knowing just what you will say Etched with ink upon my heart scenes you've stroked will not depart You have writ upon my soul tender render of your unfold Share with me your joy so tender painted with your indelible render *My heart-felt tribute to all of the talented poets at Passions In Poetry ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Sojourners delite! You paint it so well. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully written and expressed. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--How well you have penned this tender render...superior poetry from you, gal! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
margie-girl this is perfect... such perfect imagery and sweet emotions this jewel is going in to my library and the book  later-poetprincess gator jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Definitely one of your best, Marge!  Denise |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Beautiful, Marge! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Lovely Marge, What images flowed from your words. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ I appreciate your reply. Mike~ Thank you, friend. Martie~ You know how much I value your inspiration and your friendship. JanetMarie~ Awww ! Thanks for the glow ! Denise~ So appreciative am I for the wonderful thoughts that are presented by the poets here. Sent to my pen from the hearts of others. BSC~ From my heart to another ... thank you, Bonnie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, the splendor of your tender render is a real mind-bender that popped my suspenders  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge a lovely read...special thoughts of come to mind whenever I enter passions..your one in a million Marge my friend Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Fantastic, Marge!!! Beautiful poem by supreme Poetess!!! It is an honour to post along side of you And other poets of much talent in these Forums that burst with potential and love. Love ya to bits!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ You give me a smile ... I thank you. Tracie~ Such a lovely thing to say ... thanks. Lil' Lizzie~ Yes - the talent among these pages touches the heart of this lady also. Love you, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I remember this Marge(y)!!!! Lovely...and voted for K |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Lovely weave of expression and feeling Marge Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kamla~ Glad you remembered ... I remember the beautiful inspiration I receive from the talented poets here. This one is for all of you. CocoBaci~ Thank you for feeling this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poe Ay New Member
since 2000-06-30
Posts 9 |
Marge, I have read a few of your poems now. How do you do it? I note how many postings you have.... absolutely incredible. No wonder you have the ability to write so well. I bet this just flowed from your pen, it's lovely. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeAy~ Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment ... the thoughts do flow easily for me as I just let my heart open up and the words come tumbling to the page. I also am blessed with muses who frequent constantly ! LOL ! Combined with the inspiration I get from reading the talented poets here in Passion's ... shucks ... it's more than enough to handle. Bet you can tell that I LOVE IT ! Now all of those 'posts' aren't poems ... I think I only have a little over 450 actual poems on here right now. But I'm constantly working on them. Welcome to Passion's wonderful family of friends and poets. Hope you enjoy your stay ... you will, you know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
The name of Chapter 1 in the book should be called, "Marge Tindal" So many of us stand only in your poetic shadow! Danny A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Danny~ You are just too kind. Fiddle-dee-dee ... I stand shoulder to shoulder with some of the greatest poets and friends on the web and feel fortunate to do so. Thank you for such kind words, my friend. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dad-o-8 New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 8 |
Unforgetable......thanks marge....never let the quill run dry........ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Marge ... I apologize for being so late in responding! But I'm here now, and voting (click) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
dad-o-8~ You are such a trooper ! Thank you so much for the trek through this mountain ! Kit~ You're a doll ! No apology necessary .... I appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I almost missed this jewel.. I almost did!!! so glad I did not... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ I'm glad you didn't either ! Thank you ... it is a tribute I did for all the wonderful poets here who lend me such inspiration. Each thought different. Sach page of the poet so unique. Each thought shared. What a joy to be a poet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Absolutely wonderful tribute! Only you could pen this so well Marge. I love it from beginning to end and I have to....click... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was awesome Marge!!!! Loved it.....wonderful tribute to Passions!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thank you, my friend. I meant every word of it ... and still do. LoneWolf~ What a joy to know that you enjoyed it. Makes me real happy to share my thoughts with the very people who give me so much inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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