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0 posted 2000-06-28 10:34 AM

Do you know the time of night,
...just before the dawn?
When parents sleep and children dream,
...of fairies on the lawn?
When night and day are one the same,
...and dreams come ever true?
Then take my hand and fly with me,
...up to the heavens blue,
Amongst the stars and comets bright,
...unto the land of Dream,
Where hate and fear are unknown words,
...and love is all supreme,
Where pain and drugs are make believe,
...and unicorns are real,
Where happiness and tenderness,
...are all you ever feel,
Where floods and storms just don't exist,
...and clouds are sweet whipped cream,
Will you take your hand in mine,
...and fly to land of Dream?

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 06-28-2000).]

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since 1999-09-21
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1 posted 2000-06-28 10:42 AM

Mike, this poem is so's my hand and a vote!
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2 posted 2000-06-28 10:44 AM

Paints a nice picture, sometimes I find it hard to write a happy poem. So I love to read them and get ideas. I'll be thinking of unicorns and clouds at work today I think.
~Kay ^_~

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3 posted 2000-06-28 11:27 AM


I adore is
very beautiful...
and the
that it brings to mind.

Great job and I am voting!


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4 posted 2000-06-28 11:32 AM

Oooops!...I left without
checking the little box.  

I did it! I did it!  

Again...Great read!!


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since 1999-11-03
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5 posted 2000-06-28 11:46 AM

It is a nice happy poem. Very uplifting way to start my day.


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6 posted 2000-06-28 12:44 PM

What a beautiful, uplifting poem, my friend. We have to put it in the book to cancel out all the depressing poetry!!!  

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-06-28 01:43 PM

beautiful Mike...sparkles like fairy dust  

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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8 posted 2000-06-28 01:46 PM

Or shall I call it the Twilight Zone?

Mike this is exquisite poetry, muchly enjoyed.

regards, sudhir

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

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9 posted 2000-06-28 03:08 PM

Anytime Mike, anytime.....
Andrew Scott
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10 posted 2000-06-28 03:46 PM

A poem I'd be happy to read to my children.  That puts it pretty high on my list. Thanks.
X Angel
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11 posted 2000-06-28 05:08 PM

beautiful, I too would love to read it to my sons...I want them to learn to love poetry as much as their Mommy does

Poet deVine
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12 posted 2000-06-28 09:52 PM

Magnificent!!! You are one of my favorites you know!  
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13 posted 2000-06-28 10:10 PM

Yessir, Mr. Mike... I like your dreams...
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14 posted 2000-06-28 11:09 PM

Simply enchanting! I love this Mike!  


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15 posted 2000-06-29 01:06 AM

Then take my hand and fly with me,
...up to the heavens blue,

That is really nice and well done, pick me up on your way by

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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16 posted 2000-06-29 02:28 AM

mike yuh always leave me in awe
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17 posted 2000-06-29 09:04 AM

I would love to come to a land of dreams...lovely poem...

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

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18 posted 2000-07-10 11:21 AM

Hi Mike,

This is just so wonderful, belongs in a book would'nt you say,

Love,  Cerenity

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