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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Do you know the time of night, ...just before the dawn? When parents sleep and children dream, ...of fairies on the lawn? When night and day are one the same, ...and dreams come ever true? Then take my hand and fly with me, ...up to the heavens blue, Amongst the stars and comets bright, ...unto the land of Dream, Where hate and fear are unknown words, ...and love is all supreme, Where pain and drugs are make believe, ...and unicorns are real, Where happiness and tenderness, ...are all you ever feel, Where floods and storms just don't exist, ...and clouds are sweet whipped cream, Will you take your hand in mine, ...and fly to land of Dream? [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike, this poem is so enchanting...here's my hand and a vote! |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Paints a nice picture, sometimes I find it hard to write a happy poem. So I love to read them and get ideas. I'll be thinking of unicorns and clouds at work today I think. ~Kay ^_~ |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
~Mike~ I adore this...it is very beautiful... Both the writing and the pictures that it brings to mind. Great job and I am voting! MagnoliaBlue Caribbean Island Property(PARADISE) FOR SALE.Investors wanted to start World Class Resort and Marina.No Risk or Blue Sky. joonz@mindspring.com |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Oooops!...I left without checking the little box. I did it! I did it! Again...Great read!! MagnoliaBlue |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
It is a nice happy poem. Very uplifting way to start my day. Thanks, Pete |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
What a beautiful, uplifting poem, my friend. We have to put it in the book to cancel out all the depressing poetry!!! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful Mike...sparkles like fairy dust jm |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Or shall I call it the Twilight Zone? Mike this is exquisite poetry, muchly enjoyed. regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Anytime Mike, anytime..... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A poem I'd be happy to read to my children. That puts it pretty high on my list. Thanks. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
beautiful, I too would love to read it to my sons...I want them to learn to love poetry as much as their Mommy does ~Heather |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Magnificent!!! You are one of my favorites you know! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yessir, Mr. Mike... I like your dreams... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply enchanting! I love this Mike! Denise |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Then take my hand and fly with me, ...up to the heavens blue, That is really nice and well done, pick me up on your way by The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
mike yuh always leave me in awe |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
I would love to come to a land of dreams...lovely poem... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mike, This is just so wonderful, belongs in a book would'nt you say, Love, Cerenity |
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